Beautifully penned, Jade. Some dark undertones on this one, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Damian, You are right. This was inspired by darker moments in my life.

hello beautiful Jade this is some fine poetry allowing me to feel your depths 💕

Dark, sad, revealing. Wonderfully executed Jade.

I assure you we are not the only ones. I have not healed completely but this heart of mine is pretty resilient. Thank you for reading.

Thank you Visions, your comments are much appreciated.

Fantastic storytelling, John. With a lot of history and incredible imagery. Another great read my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You come up with fantastic imagery

You nailed it.

Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!

LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?

I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.

I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.

Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.

Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕

Tremendous work.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.

Damian

I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)

No. She picks them out herself. He does watch. He sits in a corner and envy’s all the men that fuck her. But she don’t care. Mr. Woody can’t even get off without being in excruciating pain. Mr. Woody is more like Mr. Softy. No not the ice cream truck!

Filled with dark humor and gritty horror. You write this style with imagination and a flair for the dark arts of poetry.

John

The fucking irony my friend. Cleverly penned, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian