Superb

Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.

Thank you, Wil;))l

Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Keith 😊

This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.

Tremendous.

I’ve never been, but your poems almost carry me there.

Beautifully penned, LDF. Incredible imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love this… great job… excellent flow… great authenticity…

We are more than our physical bodies.

There’s something very “Dr. Spock” about this. Logical. Pure Energy.
That’s some deep thinking, Peter. I’m heading into orbit.

Brenda, this absolutely breaks the heart. I am sending you so much love & the biggest hug

Powerful work. Heartbreaking.

Heartbreaking write, Brenda. This is powerfully penned my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.

Damian