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Read MoreEyes so fixed, they glaciated in sight of the arctic reality! Icicles hanging from my eyelids before the wintry glow of the sun, which is nowhere near to thaw tearcicles. These frozen chimneys, when thawed, billow the black smoke of my breakdown! The alpenglow on the snow-capped summits of...
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Thank you so much Fia! 🙏🏻
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This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?
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Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.
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Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian 🙏🏻
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FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!
Curt
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Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you for your kind words Thomas!
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The voice in our head, the legions that rule can take over if we’re not careful. I fight my own war when negative self-talk invades.
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hello dearest Tim I am fortunate actually it took many miracles to get me to this age so many brushes with death…nature is beautiful to look at I guess I just have to remember my time will come no matter where I am and all I can do is do my best until then I am just feeling my mortality thank you my friend ❤️
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Vivid and sharp. Fantastic work.
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good morning dearest Thomas thank you graciously for the understanding and lovely comment ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI burn with frost, a freezing flame A blaze that chills but feels the same I melt the ice to make a spark Yet leave the wood forever dark My heat is cold, my light is numb A fire that makes the senses dumb I...
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It’s so cold it burns. The rhyme scheme is excellent.
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Thanks Fia..appreciate the comment..appreciate you reading
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Read MorePoetry is madness A ritual I do, but do not know.A night that conquers,Drunks me to helplessness.And it kills shame,Guilt. It hits you like an exploding racket.It shoots out you naked.
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I like this, and the title is perfect.
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Thank you Fia.
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We also thought of this as beyond a first date when you’re invited inside and beyond a good night kiss. Tight
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Thank you. 🙂
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This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.