You write this story with such clarity and weave it into an engaging scene that reaches out and rivets my attention. Great poem.

John

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You have expressed a real life tale with honesty and clarity.
I have been there. Got locked up for being drunk in public myself once.
I think I said to a police officer “Your a C…U…N…T. I didn’t say it i just spelt it out.
He didn’t understand. When he realised what I was saying I was thrown in the van.
I they took my clothes and gave me some grey prison scrubs. When I sobered up I started singing prison songs.
“He’s in the jailhouse now.” and Locked up by Akon. Some counties in England are stricker on booze than others. I have been out of my mind all over England, but Yorkshire was the place they locked me up. Don’t do it in Yorkshire.

Thanks for sharing this poem. I am glad to know I am not the only one.

regards
James

This sounds like such a Midwest thing. Great telling of the night!

Thank you so much.

hello dearest Thomas who is to say what wisdom is maybe knowing it is futile is true wisdom…not all of us play games and if we do we may not realize it until later that might be wisdom a reckoning with behaviors… great write 💕

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks, my friend.

Thank you.

“traces of humanity remain”. Basically how I feel about the world as a whole. Great ink.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

An insightful write! Unfortunately the quill of the greats are considered rare goods nowadays.

Good job, Thomas!

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Insightful and precise write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, and how you changed the writing typography only enhanced the piece. It has been an enjoyment to work with you.

And, thank you right back, Fia! =)

You’re such an easy breeze to write beside.
It was interesting fun blending our individual skills and learning how you think.

You’re uniquely special! ⁓ Richard🖌

Beautifully penned, Richard & Fia. Amazing collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

A great collaboration between the both of you. The wording brings attention to every detail like it was under a microscope. Two great writers together….great stuff. 🙂

This flows smoothly, sweetly and flawless, the reader won’t feel it’s a collaboration at all, I like how it’s like small promises come together to bond as a one loving poem, the title is wonderful too, a wonderful collaboration for sure. Thank You both.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very deep and creative. Wonderful ink.

Thanks