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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreAre you authentic?Does your own soul recognize you?Have things become so muddy that you reflection is obscured to your own eyes?For sleep will not be easy or confrontingWhile you pretend to be at peace for every dip, crater or...
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Wing it??? Okay 😆
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Being authentic is one of my daily struggles.
A deep, thoughtful poem, Fia!-
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Thank you M.E
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We are all authentic. Even if we hide behind masks of obscurity. I guess human beings have to navigate the weird system they find themselves in.
Very thought provoking work.
Regards James-
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Thank you James, your right even if we hide it’s authentic.
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You are right Adira. It is difficult to trust what we see, especially with AI. Thank you ;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Like this a lot my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, 😊 Damian
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Superb work.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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I’ve always tried to be my authentic self but you really made me think on this one. Guess we all have parts we don’t speak of. Maybe it matters that we realize and work on them even if they stay behind closed doors?
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I appreciate you commenting. I made you think on this. Excellent. I like when something i write makes people pause a moment
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Read More"Whore! Wouldn't wanna be you!" A hoarse voice slurred from the open window of a car idling at the intersection of Union st. and West Columbus Ave. The "whore" in question stood as emotionless...
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Tremendous work, my friend.
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Thank you, my friend
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Chapter two posted!
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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uma summultima and
Bluevelvet are now friends
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Daniel Long and
Bluevelvet are now friends
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Read MoreComes now my midnight lover’s callthat softly echoes down the hall.I pull the sheets and lift my head,then slowly saunter out of bedso careful not to wake your sleepwith all the secrets that I keep.He meets me at the...
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If only life was like that…lol
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And death, for that matter.
But yeah, I know what you mean, Peter!xoxo
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Powerful fucking poem. Great work.
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I’m so glad you think so, Thomas! Thank you!
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I think I’d be in sin every part of the day.. if the night started like this! LOL Great poem!!
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Thank you so much, Christoper! I’m so glad you liked it.
xoxo
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Awesome poem Kitten. You sure know know to heat up a page.
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I’m so glad you think so, Kenn! Thanks for reading my stuff!
xoxo
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Whew!!! Intense indeed
Very well written.Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj! Thanks for reading!
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“GULP!” 😳
Well, Dear Poetess,
So much for the site’s pornagrophy rules … LOL!I’m not so sure it’s all a sin
because done over and again,
there’s a beauty in every stroke
of throaty moans sooo softly spoke.“You hesitate, but in the end,
I smother you in evening sin.
By midnight moon, you drown content
between my legs as I repent.” (there’s nothin’ better’n making-up)Not a lot of metaphor, but loads of excellent imagery, giddy flow, smoothly laid syntax, succulent stimulation, consistent 8-count meter, spot-on rhyme scheme ‘n art choice, and presentation appeal.
It’s more than a little obvious this is definitely not your first poetry rodeo … masterfully done, Lady-Poet.Now, excuse me, please, while I dip my head in a bucket of ice! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
What a review, Rascal, and thank you for that! I’m honored. I think you covered everything from mechanical technique to emotional effect. Wait… there are rules on this site? Shit. Let me look that up. Hold up, someone’s at the door carrying fuzzy handcuffs – and they’re not in uniform. Let me take a rain check on that.Rascal, this review is amazing. I’m giddy. Thank you!
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Mmmm!
Something must have inspired me … can’t imagine what it was? ; p-
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I hope you can figure it out…
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sorry… I’m not.. you will just have to wing it