Comes now my midnight lover’s call
that softly echoes down the hall.
I pull the sheets and lift my head,
then slowly saunter out of bed
so careful not to wake your sleep
with all the secrets that I keep.
He meets me at the bottom stair;
removes my gown and underwear.
We tiptoe lightly to the den
and spark the fire of evening sin.
My hands against the mantle rest.
His fingers roam across my breasts,
then down my belly to the place
he opens wide to have a taste.
I sprinkle honey on his lips
and arch my back into his grip
with heaving gasps as he devours
the nectar from my blooming flower.
The scent of mating fuels the flame.
He slaps my ass and pulls my mane.
Passion pools between my thighs
with every thrust his tongue applies
until, so sloppy, wet, and wild,
my pussy begs to be defiled.
Above the hearth, the roaring heat
has foiled our plans to be discreet.
You hear my moans and rise to see
my lover shove his cock in me.
His dick’s so thick, you stare in awe.
He holds me down and fucks me raw;
no spermicide, no latex sheath.
I spread my burning hole beneath
his pounding spear, his slapping balls.
His shaft is tearing up my walls.
You watch with puppy dog despair.
My eggs are ripe. He doesn’t care.
His sack contracts. You hear him grunt.
He shoots his semen up my cunt.
My muscles clinch. I scream, “Oh, god!”
A ring of icing coats his rod.
As I convulse in ecstasy,
his cum is pouring out of me –
a milky river down my crack.
He’s knocked me up. It’s just a fact.
With teary eyes, you look distressed.
He wipes his prick off in my nest.
I coax you please to lay beside
and let me give your face a ride.
You hesitate, but in the end,
I smother you in evening sin.
By midnight moon, you drown content
between my legs as I repent.
If only life was like that…lol
And death, for that matter.
But yeah, I know what you mean, Peter!
xoxo
Powerful fucking poem. Great work.
I’m so glad you think so, Thomas! Thank you!
I think I’d be in sin every part of the day.. if the night started like this! LOL Great poem!!
Thank you so much, Christoper! I’m so glad you liked it.
xoxo
Awesome poem Kitten. You sure know know to heat up a page.
I’m so glad you think so, Kenn! Thanks for reading my stuff!
xoxo
Whew!!! Intense indeed
Very well written.
Naaj
Thank you, Naaj! Thanks for reading!
“GULP!” 😳
Well, Dear Poetess,
So much for the site’s pornagrophy rules … LOL!
I’m not so sure it’s all a sin
because done over and again,
there’s a beauty in every stroke
of throaty moans sooo softly spoke.
“You hesitate, but in the end,
I smother you in evening sin.
By midnight moon, you drown content
between my legs as I repent.” (there’s nothin’ better’n making-up)
Not a lot of metaphor, but loads of excellent imagery, giddy flow, smoothly laid syntax, succulent stimulation, consistent 8-count meter, spot-on rhyme scheme ‘n art choice, and presentation appeal.
It’s more than a little obvious this is definitely not your first poetry rodeo … masterfully done, Lady-Poet.
Now, excuse me, please, while I dip my head in a bucket of ice! ⁓ Rascal🖌
Wow! Wow! Wow!
What a review, Rascal, and thank you for that! I’m honored. I think you covered everything from mechanical technique to emotional effect. Wait… there are rules on this site? Shit. Let me look that up. Hold up, someone’s at the door carrying fuzzy handcuffs – and they’re not in uniform. Let me take a rain check on that.
Rascal, this review is amazing. I’m giddy. Thank you!
Mmmm!
Something must have inspired me … can’t imagine what it was? ; p
I hope you can figure it out…