Marvelous piece of writing Fia. Powerful, unapologetic and demanding. This is a well thought out piece. Nice work.

Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Your voice was authentic, focused, and real.. A very moving piece. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

I imagine this was somewhat cathartic once you got it off your chest and out in the open .. You have a fine pen and a lovely voice by the way .. Neville 😎👍

Pow! Truth!

Wow. Powerful work.

Thank you for saying that, John😊

Fia, this is one of the best poems defining the realities of love gone wrong that I have read. Your introspection here is precisely articulate, emotionally honest to a tee, and powerful. This really spoke to me as a man. You really told it like it is with the sincerity of a genuine woman who has been through the wringer. Poetry that does more than engage the reader it made me think and feel deeply. And the spontaneity here is fabulous. Thank you so much for sharing this testament.

John

Death?
I like this. I keep trying to work out the riddle as I read. There are some things we can never understand.
Kind regards
james

Brilliant 👍

Thank you both for reading and responding..I’m glad you enjoyed..

This clock takes away all that was and could be. This is well-made and makes one think of the past. I enjoyed this.

I’m glad you both enjoyed..and thats a great take with the amnesia..time is our most precious commodity and something we def take for granted

To us the perfect Halloween piece, and thanks for remembering Lady

From the title I connected your poem to writer’s block. I was like: thats interesting. I wonder what is Butcher’s block is like. Reading it reminded me somehow of Joe Goldberg from the series You. I enjoyed reading your poem. The ending was satisfying too. Lol

Yes you was the inspiration to this piece, and thank you Lady