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Read MoreI am the mirror none can faceReflecting void, erasing traceThe self dissolves when it is soughtA shadow born of lightless thoughtI show the eyes that dare not seeThe truth behind identity No image forms, no frame remains Just fractured glass and...
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Phenomenally penned, Mstrmnd. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with precise detail and an amazing flow. Dare I say it’s very lyrical my friend. Dig this. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThey're doing tricks on the blindAnd busy bee got controlThe other brick in the wallAnother day on the jobAnd that's the way things work Digging, shoving, to fuel the machineryWatch the pistons pumpThat's the drive that keeps the heart alive And...
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This has a rhythm to it that makes it feel like it belongs in a song. Nice
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Appreciate it that Fia. Thank you!
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Powerful and poignant.
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Thank you Thomas.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I concur with Fia & Mary this has a lyrical feel my friend. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hello Damian. Thanks for the kind words.
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Thanks Mary. You kick ass!
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Cool. I’ll be waiting.
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A shadow-born whisper, the phrase itself feels like a seed of myth, half curse, half invocation, sprouting in the dark soil of secrecy. A living emblem of power and paradox… The serpent coils around the hidden flame, a covenant etched in shadows and bone, from silence it blooms, a forbidden crown.
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An absolutely lovely comment. Thanks PAR.
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Read MoreI love youI have no guide to help meNothing to protect me from your stormI felt like an idiot sitting in your carYour face was so beautifulI didn't think I can love anyoneI love youWouldn't it be great if...
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This is such a heartfelt plea. I felt this.
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Glad you enjoyed Fia. Thank you!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. I agree with Fia, this is a heartfelt plea, or a confession possibly. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the comments!
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One powerful line. With many meanings. This is good.
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Appreciate that Fia. Thanks!!
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Powerful, Keith. Got me pondering.. Appreciate you, brother.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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This one line says everything. The power of opposites! They are the two sides of the same coin and prerequisites to conceive and appreciate the counterpart.
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Hello Elke. Thank you for the gracious comment. xo
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Right on.
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Thanks fellow poet.
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Thank you..sometimes the mirror reflects more than just our reflection..they show our true soul..something haunting and beautiful at the same time..thank you for the comment