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Read More“I don't feel pain, I don't feel alive, yet no angels in the bright moonshine.” The lady of sorrow confided to herself aloud in a whisper. One so delicate, it could vanish like flying dust should she be loud. But she was standing stoically at...
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The opening lines set a fragile, haunting mood that carries through the poem beautifully.
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Read MoreHe watched her and her dragon from the windows on the bridgeFlying back and forth along the perimeter as if riding along a ridgeShe was a Valkyrie and could somehow sense the dangers of NibiruShe couldn't penetrate the force...
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Oh my. Good morning. Better than coffee Me. lol
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We was sure that there was another Valkyrie piece, Thanks Lady
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This read like an excerpt from Heavy Metal magazine form the late 70’s
Like a dope, imaginative cosmic rendezvous.
Unique execution, broMuch respect
Naaj
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Thanks a ton dude, We watched both Heavy Metal cartoons, also the Valkyrie of Thor’s cartoon. We kinda wanted this as Sci-fi meets mythology.
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Read MoreWhy am I drawn to your writing? I'm not sure myself. Is it because I can see the damage and every word Or is it that I can see you See, you get so engulfed in every word To make your point come across? It's...
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Passionately penned, Fia. Damn, the room got hot. This one is fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian <3
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Sizzling piece Fia. Well written and scorching hot. xo
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Thank you, Vision, Keeping it warm here. lol
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amazingly penned, a tantalizing, fiery read. that’s sensually engaging.
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Thank you so much Chantepleure appreciate that.
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Like this sexiness Lady, we agree that a great piece of writing can stir the loins. Tight work
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Thank you Me, love stirring the loins
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This feels raw and self-aware, especially in how it explores the act of reading as intimacy. There’s a lot of honesty here.
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Thank you, I tend to fall into the poems I read
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This is some sexy voyeurism you got going on here, Fia
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Thank you Naaj. It’s funny what the mind will conjure up as you read.
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Read MoreAt Stars Rite, we want to make it clear that no member is removed from the site without due process. We believe in fairness, transparency, and maintaining a safe and respectful writing community. Below is an outline of our...
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Thanks for the information, Fia. Is that spam right above my comment? Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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It was
I got rid of it.
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Great info. Thanks Fia.
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Thank you Vision
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Good to know:).
Thanks for being transparent and letting us know what the process is.
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Read MoreThis conspiracy revivalIs going viralPredators held liable??Epstein suicidal??Ghislaine's guilty trial Rehearsed recitalHer new penal arrivalA luxurious lifestyle Presidential survival Lying in denial ...
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Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. Speaking truth my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for reading and commenting..hope all is well
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This is a strong piece I like this the most “In a vicious cycle Twisting their spinal Blaming their rivals”
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Catchy..thank you..hope all is well and you have a happy holiday season and a safe and healthy new year
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Pretty cool, Daniel. I like the visions that it creates easily for the reader. With an artistic flair of course.