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    Barely Visible Indentations

    Barely Visible Indentations   They were always such delicate and pretty little indentations, that I could never quite get my head around, nor fully understand why she ever tried to hide them in the first place .. After all, they served only to mark briefly...

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    THE SADIE PROBLEM

    This is in reference to the poem I made called Sadie Winters is not real. (Now deleted)It's based on an episode by Rick Beato (youtube) in which he created an AI character named Sadie Winters who is a fictional...

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    • If you follow Rick Beato you must be a music enthusiast.
      I have seen Rick discussing the impact of AI in the music industry and even he has said it’s getting harder to identy human from digitally created music.
      The same can be said for any ‘writing’ site….who is doing the writing.
      I for one, would never post an AI produced piece without declaring it.
      Sometimes, I’ll write a piece, get AI to tidy it up and then post both versions and let others decide which is better.Usually, it’s the AI free version .
      Its a crazy old world.🌞

      • Yes it is, Peter. I’m a drummer of 52 years. Thanks for the comment.

    • Hell yeah, Beato, has a great show. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • There a few things in life I detest more than AI .. and I can only think of four members of my own species that fall into that category .. All of whom are supposedly world leaders and one of which has no intelligence whatsoever, let alone artificial .. 😎👍I found this to be a compelling read which could prove write for further debate .. Neville

    • I fear this is going to be a case of “the internet is forever”. Once it’s been used to train an AI, which somehow it seems like it already has, I don’t think deleting it will remove it from its “memory”. We’re entering a brave new world of technology and I’m quickly starting to feel very unprepared for it.

    • Powerful and poignant

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    Shorts from Library of Unwritten Love Letters

    Adventures in the Skin Trade    Baggage kneels heavy on our hearts  late night Hotel porter lays two suitcases  underneath a broken neon sign.  It crackles ‘For Lost Lovers Only’    Crush my burning lips as ashes  coil bed sheets into sailing knots,  let's shelter in our skin...

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    Beneath Her Pretty Dress

    Beneath Her Pretty Dress   Now isn’t that truly something else something wonderful no less .. While no longer taught and flat but lightly bowed and more convex perhaps .. I hereby do confess I am already very much in love with what has just begun to show .. But for...

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    • It is nice to read that a man still appreciates a woman’s maturing body

      • Bless you Fia .. I know I surely do and always shall but the one in question has a baby growing inside her .. Neville

    • One of my favorite places is beneath a pretty woman’s dress. 🙂

    • I am certain that every man is completely agreeing with You here, what a playful Neville!

      • Bless You dear Light💕.. this little scribble was conceived within moments of my being told the young lady in question was going to have a baby .. it’s an old poem now .. a bit like me 😎⭐💛🌻👍

        • Wow! It’s about “baby” and giving life, You sure have the way with words lol. I deeply appreciate this poem in a different way now! Bless You 💕 Forever Young Neville 😎

    • A mature was to admire a woman!

    • I snickered and thought unclean thoughts like a school boy when first read, completely missing the lady’s age, sidelined, as I was, by the niceties behind that dress. Now aware that she might not be young and that I’m no longer 12, my motor is still revving. Summer dresses are just so fine!

    • Really beautiful piece, showing lovely appreciation for another. I enjoyed this.

    • Many thanks for stopping by and checking out my little scribble .. so very much appreciated .. Neville

    • The passion and play of this is an utter delight. I love wearing dresses. They’re a one and done, no fuss picking something to match. It’s the feel of them I think most women prefer. The feminine quality that stirs a man’s imagination…so well captured here.

    • I’ll take it, that’ll do nicely .. Very nicely indeed .. Cheers & Many thanks Kelly .. Neville 🍷

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    Wicked Woman

    somethin’ bout the way she movessubtle yet so attractivethe innocent way her body groovesshe’s a hurricane burning radioactiveseductive eyes that mystifymakes you wanna fucking danceshe’s the spider, yeah you’re the flycaught up in a web of circumstance… don’t turn your...

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    • That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That she was, her coordinates were lost in the late 90’s. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s high praise, and good company. What a lovely comment. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well through GarageBand and Logic Pro, I’m working on that. lol. The problem with not being able to play an instrument, is that it only leaves a few options. So I’m working on a solo album to give these old lyrics a home, there will be new lyrics as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with lyrics my friend. I plan on this one making the cut, I’ve always wanted “Wicked” to have music again. It had music in 97, but it was never recorded. Thanks for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s the theory.. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
      It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I try, I always write to the beat in my head. Maybe a strip club, or some other place where human beings gather. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.

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