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Thank you Damian, You are right. This was inspired by darker moments in my life.
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hello beautiful Jade this is some fine poetry allowing me to feel your depths 💕
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Thank you kindly Brenda. Sometimes I really get into deep emotions…and I pen it out.
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Dark, sad, revealing. Wonderfully executed Jade.
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I assure you we are not the only ones. I have not healed completely but this heart of mine is pretty resilient. Thank you for reading.
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Thank you Visions, your comments are much appreciated.
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Read MoreYou have releasedthe Kraken.The mighty eye opens,thrusting to the swelling surface.I come for you in waves,fists strapped to the starboard bow.Your tentacles are drapedlike twisted sea dreadsswaying across your varnished shoulders.I am the captain’s daughter.You are the mutiny of...
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You come up with fantastic imagery
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Thanks, girl! I like the ocean. I was a pirate in another life.
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You nailed it.
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I’m glad you think so, Thomas. Thank you!
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Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!
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LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?
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I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.
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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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No. She picks them out herself. He does watch. He sits in a corner and envy’s all the men that fuck her. But she don’t care. Mr. Woody can’t even get off without being in excruciating pain. Mr. Woody is more like Mr. Softy. No not the ice cream truck!
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Filled with dark humor and gritty horror. You write this style with imagination and a flair for the dark arts of poetry.
John
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This style comes out very naturally for me. I was always into satire, horror and black comedy as a kid. Thanks John.
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The fucking irony my friend. Cleverly penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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Read MoreHey lady, are you going my way?Hop in, there's nothing more to sayWe'll find a spot underneath the moonSit back and we'll listen to some tunesYou'll experience the universe & starsPlastic Jesus on the dash of my carJupiter, Neptune...
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Let’s go. I’ll take you for a ride.
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You let me know the time & place and we’ll travel anywhere you want to go.
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Visions, I dig this! Reminds me of a 1950s film noir movie. You wrote this with pizzazz. Dig how you made this scene come alive as I read.
John
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Awesome! Yes. Totally 1950’s, early 1960’s vibe I was going for. Maybe some Eddie Cochran playing or Dick Dale. Had fun with this. Thanks John.
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Beautifully penned, Jade. Some dark undertones on this one, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian