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Read MoreWhat would happen if time stood still Would a tear still drop Would the heart still beat Would that moment still be etched in memory Words can never be taken back When both cheeks are slapped there is no other to give Wounds that are...
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It might be. I find it weird its never enough time. Thank you Peter 😊
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Unfortunately some live in snow globes. Frozen in the same memories and misfortunes.
A well written, thought provoking poem, with a good concept. Well done, Fia! “)-
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Snow globes …well that’s a thought. To be stuck in that one time and place
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Im trying new ways to inspire myself. 😊
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Chère F.,
How have you done this, with almost each line/sentence a different perspective.
You always seem to surprise me and it looks like maybe it’s surprising you that you do.
What a lovely way to start a new week!
Love it to bits!
Warm greetings, Gus-
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It is inspiring me. Pushing me a bit to see things differently. Thank you Gus 😊
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To me, time as a gift. None of us knows, how long their lives will last. I think, it is most important to use the gift of time we receive to find out who we are, why we are here and how to live a life in harmony and at peace with ourselves and all of creation.
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Thank you so much, Elke;))
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No idea
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Read MoreP=Romeo, what makes you so sad? R=My emotions are my own why do you ask? P=I hoped life was treating you kinder than it did before R=Before when? When my love walked out the door. P=Why not open your heart for someone new....
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Cuz:))
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nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)
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Thank you Sam. Really a play? Maybe lol
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I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.
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Thank you Kay-1
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I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..
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Thank you Neville. I was sitting here thinking of how he would sound and feel if things were different. I may try my hand at writing a play, but I want his voice to stay true to the original. It’s a thought.
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All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.
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It’s bright and sunny for Romeo because Juliet’s back huh? lol Thank you Sam;)
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Read MoreSkin slick with sweat, Firm thighs wrapped around my hips, Your nails etch red lines onto my back. As my groin thrusts into your spread lips. I hold your wrists above your head. As you whisper your 'wants' into my ears.. ...
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What’ll you do, indeed?! Hot Rhyme, Mister! xx
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Thanks!
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Read Moremeditating in the energy I secret my deepest feelingsallowing them to rise as incencehigh and higher into the heavenswhere they are understoodwith vibrations of recognitionI'm remembered fondlysacred art of the wayto sing in poetryit is the language of the...
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Crimsin I enjoyed this piece and the picture is amazing.
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thank you graciously beautiful Fia I really try to match the picture with the poem I’m happy you liked this ❤️
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thank you graciously dearest Styxian I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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This is very beautiful. I want to read this constantly now. Thank you 🙂
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hello dearest Brandon I’m so happy you liked this thank you graciously❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write with a spiritual vibe my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Daman thank you graciously for your support ❤️
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“The onyx kingdom welcomes me” is lovely and profound. You have laced your words into a contemplative journey throughout this piece. Very nice.
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hello lovely poet thank you graciously and welcome ❤️
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This is cool. I relate to the nervous energy at times I just keep going.;))
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Hello lovely Fia thank you graciously for the love ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Chère C.,
A little rhyme replying your lovely poem:This photo’s truly showing
What I always knowed*
Parking on the sidewalk is
How to define off roadSo rope in a big wheel
and you’ll be certain of
One big wheel will be enough
If you want lasting loveClumsy? Yes!
But so what!
There’s more than enough people who take themselves too seriously…*Dion Dimucci’s past sense of knowing
Warm greetings, Gus-
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lol I love your offbeat poem I’ve never really been one for money but if I can make some from my artistic edeavors who knows thank Gus ❤️
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Nice write Fia.
I’m not sure if time even exists in the universe…..seems like a human construct.