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Read MoreHer feet scorchesthe Earth,with every blistering step. Resentment within herselffor all those long nights she wept. Hating herself for losing control of things;In her mind on a loop— “They will pay.All they do is,Lie,steal,fuck,and scheme.” But now...now,she is a walking revelation. Her heart,...
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Thank you, sweet Fia. xx
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This is incredible, my friend. Written with emotions, that could light a match…smoking a cigarette.
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Handle the flame with care, my dear friend. xx
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Chère PG.,
Hope this finds you well?!What a gentle ending you’ve made of this.
And what a lovely piece of work!
Kind regards, Gus-
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Gus, it is always a pleasure..thank you for your kind words.
I hope all is well! xx
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Powerfully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend. I always dig the layers in your work, fantastic storytelling, tied together with the conclusion of being in a better state of being by the end. Nicely done per usual, I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those who get it, just get it. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words my friend.
xx
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Thank god he came … or we would all have been fucked … nicely done
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Sam thank you for reading! And yeah, or maybe it would have been enjoyable .. I guess we will never know now 😉 xx
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Read MorePiss & Shit in your mouthSnow cone beef treats made at my house Mouth pie cream vanilla wafers wait for my tongue Ice cream fribble on my nippleSoda flavored onion pickles I like to hold change in my belly button Holy guacamoliaBatman flavored...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Do you have a food fetish? lol. Don’t answer I don’t wanna know that bad. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love food and I love sex. Put them together and you may have something there my friend. But this was taken from the outer reaches of my mind. Thanks!
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Good that I have already eaten breakfast. Your creativity doesn’t know any bounds, and this is great. Well done, my friend!
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Hello Elke. I thank you for the comments, always!!
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This one’s wild, unhinged, and gleefully grotesque—like a carnival mirror reflecting chaos.
It’s shocking, sure, but it wears its own madness proudly; your voice doesn’t flinch, and neither should the reader.-
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Thanks Thomas. Let’s eat!
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Read MoreIllusion or realitySane or insanityDemons running through my veinsThere's nothing I would ever change Network damage - Connection SplitInput - Output - Complete Shit Illusion or realitySane or insanityHarsh stories & poems run through my brainInside my body, a madman reigns It's...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. You gotta draw a line somewhere. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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Well, you should not have to give that part of you up. Keep writing.
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Appreciate the feedback Fia.
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Read MoreA cold January nightit changed his whole lifeShe'd not been long his wifebut during the night she diedHelpless - he stands there all aloneLonely - a long hard way to go When they first met the angels sangIt was love...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate you Damian.
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Thank you my friend. You rock!!
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Its amazing how love can cut so deep that you can’t take the knife out if you tried. Love this
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Well damn this is intense and written with passion. The ending gave it softness and tenderness. loved it