Phenomenal storytelling, Fia. Always love your dialogue it’s very authentic my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.

Damian

First word and first reaction. Jesus.
I do not say that often, but you made me say it so many times that I may have to go to church. What a chapter.

Passionately penned, DK. You definitely know your way around adjectives my friend. Very descriptive indeed, the flashback with the events of the wedding, was a nice contrast to the festivities. Deep undertones my friend, incredible storytelling. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hell yeah. Publish this stuff Meg!!!

Wow. You nailed this one.

Ohhh, goodness-ME!

How can I adequately explain how fully I’ve enjoyed the foreplay, and every single succulently filling bit between Dan’s ‘n Meg’s actual consummation, and ummm-HMMM, what a magnificently sublime consummational array of endlessly various climaxes it was … WHEWWWEE!

Excuse me, please, Ma’am, while I turn up the oxygen supply!
Onward, UPward! ⁓ Rascal🖌

hello lovely Fia this is beautiful and so serene 💕

You are making my petals open from way over here. Just imagine my aroma as an arrangement on your table. You took the words right out of my mouth… LAY ME

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! A lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Sounds very blissful. Nothing like a day of bliss. Great ink.

Enjoyed this.

A lovely, delicate piece. Well done Fia.

I really like this. Feels like classic poetry. Warm and nostalgic. Very nice, Fia

Naaj

Love the way you write Fia, enjoyed this read..

Everything fading until there are no colours left at all…..this is the truth.

No place like home. I wonder if the moon is recycling our souls. Sometimes everything looks correct painted in black. My complete & utter condolences. ~hugs~

I feel your loss in your words, and the picture is a good representation of how you feel.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. The words work well with the painting my friend. It does represent how you feel. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is absolutely fantastic, girl. Your painting is incredible too.

You paint this scene with vivid color.

Outstanding storytelling, DK. This is just incredible detail, like you definitely pull from life experience, about fishing you can tell you know what you’re talking about. Like I said before you have much depth in your seductive tales. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m so glad that you’re glad!
Actually, this is my first attempt at a series or book on this site. I thought that I had started it, but I was mistaken. Then, I found out I could not incorporate my previous post into a series. So, I reposted the chapter and added. Do you think I should take the first one down? I hated to lose the comments, but it’s repetitive.

Yeah. Fuck it. That’s my mantra.

As I previously said. Your story telling is superb. Intriguing, hot, pleasurable and orgasmic. XXX

Glorious, DK, simply spellbinding!

I find it amazingly brilliant how you so easily keep me so arousingly enthralled in your living, breathing, mental, emotional, psychological, almost hypnotic, erotically engaging spell.

Lucky us this is an ongoing series!
Thank you ever-so warmly, Our Incomparable Master Authoress! ⁓ Richard🖌

This anthology is super arousing. I love the attention to detail.