Broom

S. Libellule
1 year, 6 months ago

Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 6 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Bat Powers
1 year, 6 months ago

Tight ink Have a great day!!

Bat
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 6 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 6 months ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 6 months ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.

Damian
goldenmyst
1 year, 6 months ago

Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.

John
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 6 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 6 months ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
Curly Grace
6 months ago

Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the groove comes through, that was my intent. I hadn’t read this one in a while but it still holds true. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian