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Benjamin Scraps posted in the group Music is Art
I put my two weeks-notice in on Monday. Sacrificing some salary for a chance at happiness and/or at least some fulfillment. Been in a rut of late. Heading back to the jungle, baby. Giving up some great perks and awesome bennies. To say I’m apprehensive, excited and nervous all at once would be an understatement. I’m going to miss some of these ol’…Read More
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thank you so much beautifull Fia you made my night ❤️
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously please forgive my tardy responses on the other poems your on mind and I will catch up I appreciate you deeply ❤️
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Read MoreShe was made beautifulsuperficially flawlessimpenetrable, perhaps.Heaven sent, yet I knewall lofty things crashfrom the weight of conscience. The gods gave her a jarpristine, ornate even thoughof human influences.She kept it close, intimately hers-Had vowed not to open itif she hoped...
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This form of poetry is so entrancing. “That some boundaries are crossed by desire.” Feel that.
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Thanks Fia. I read up on the story a couple of times, and was contemplating adding more gods names dropped in it. But nah, I decided to keep it mostly intimate between the two. The idea was to keep it symbolic, erotic, but not to cross the obvious language of the obvious. lol.
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There is so much power in this write!
Each line conjures such intense emotional pull. Like magnets colliding!
You’r waiting for an explosion 💥 that feels exquisite. You had me at the edge of my seat reading this. Hahah.
Phew, this was intense and filled with curiosity.
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not to mention the connection with the name “Pandora”… I was going to take and use a picture of one of the small jewelry boxes here on the(your) dresser. But the one I used works too I guess.
You know how long I messed with this write. I still see a little bit of edits… But I’m resting it. LOL
Hey, it’s no secret where such inspiration comes from, for me to get ideas like this! What!Pew pew!
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The splendor of your poem filled me as I read with a rapturous yet softly and darkly wonder. I could see Pandora with her jar and the first tentative attraction unfolding until that jar of opened and the tempests come. But after the storm there is a truth in her being that is irresistible and compelling in the utmost. I could feel this in my heart and it was a truly splendorous read.
John
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Much appreciated, John. That’s quite a comment! I was really torn over whether to write of the result of the opening moreso. But decided to end it the way it is. Mostly because the write became a bit too lengthy, so I felt the need to cut it like I did.
Your comment is awesome, thank you!-Mark
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Thank you very much, Bat. This one took quite a bit of work!
How’s Gotham? 😉-
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Two face and the Riddler are causing havoc
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Well what a hell of a comment, Brenda. Thanks for that. I’m trying to find subjects a bit unordinary. This one was a leap!
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I am doing well, Damian. A recent trip to Texas (to see Del) was awesome.
Thank you for the supportive comment, too. This one took quite a bit of work, and hacking up the lines, for days. I’m trying to be interesting for the reader/s, so any encouraging words go a long way. Thank you.
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Read MoreIt was a glorious sunny day in March, the warmest day of the year so far, when I met the girl who changed my life. Lately, I’d taken to walking alone in the countryside carrying the worries of the...
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This is soo good, favorite line, “with the understanding the light shines so bright only because of the darkness”