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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
I remember when this group came out I was like.. Yeah
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Read MoreShe’s growing fingernails! Look at her tiny hands! She’s holding up her own bottle! She’s learned to wave! She is brilliant at handwriting. She keeps doodling on her hands. She isn’t great with using her fingers to count. She can tie her shoelaces! She’s huddled up in...
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Agree with Fia entirely.
10 out of 10
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Quite vivid, it’s captivating the reader.
I’m admiring the character at play.
Wonderful and disturbing at the same time.
A sensual piece. x
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I regret not having read this, your latest dollop of smut, earlier, CS! HJx
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Haha!!! One of the realest testimonies [poems] I’ve ever read
Real talk on both ends [perspectives]
Dope shit and much neededMuch respect
Naaj
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We all have traveled that road of regret. And some are still on it with no off ramp.
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This has some unexpected twists and turns.
But it is indeed, a reality check for some.
If only she had fertility issues. It wouldn’t be a nightmare unfolding. x
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Twist and turns in the process of regret can lead to negativity.
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That’s true.
Some difficult circumstances to overcome.
I admire the originality of the piece. And how it is so realistic.
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I have lived it many times throughout my life. Now being older, wisdom has prevented me from making some of the same mistakes.
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That’s the best way.
Let some other fool be the victim.
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That’s a funny and truthful poem! Well written!! Thanks!
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Read MoreOh, come to me my love in the bluest of the night sky The stars are in jubilation of our union The depth and swells of the ocean Rise in approval Oh, come and not fear The strength of the lightening as our hands touch The...
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Beautifully penned, Fia. This had such an uplifting vibe my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you. Damian :))
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This kinda rocks in a deliciously love poem kinda way .. fingers crossed for the future .. Neville
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I will keep them crossed for those who are about to venture down that path. Thank you Neville.
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Dope!! ’nuff said!!
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you Naaj;))
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Chère F.,
A subtle prayer
A declaration of love
Is all that I am
Thinking of….You are a class of/on your own (what do I know of your language?)
And this question answer format is a beautiful find.
Needless to say I love it to bits.
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Thank you so much Duhsjaak
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This reminds me of classic poetry from the early 1900’s. It has that feel and language. Nice one,, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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This is such a sigh-worthy piece. I think most of us embark on that journey with these hopes. For some, it lasts. For others…not so much. I love the fierce optimism in this one
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Thank you Willow. That means a lot;)
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Fia, this is a jubilant celebration of love that you paint with lyrical wonder. I enjoyed this so much my heart sang as I read. You really made me so happy reading this tonight. I am rejoicing through the magic of your poetic and loving poem of an eternal flame that cannot be extinguished.
John
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Thank you John;) That put a smile on my face;)
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Well done and beautiful work
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Thank you, Lizz;))
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This said a lot without it blatantly saying it. It breaks my heart.