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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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Read MoreDo you remember the days When you heard the radio play We are the world And “One” on Bono’s tour We just wanna have fun Was chased by I wanna dance with somebody Are those days done Hello anybody! A Smooth Criminal was played all-day Now we have...
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Music and politics collide often. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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They have gone away, Thank you Atticus.
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okay, will get on this.
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Tremendous work. I remember those days well. You bot me thinking about Terrance Trent Darby…Wishing Well. Great song.
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Yes, I know that song. Thank you, Thomas
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Read MoreI bowed down to the demonOne too many timesWhat little soul I have leftseeps into the dead earth Blood trails of hopegathered in a shot glassto taint and warp Beauty is the deceiverand I love to be lied toStaring off into...
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“Hope gathered in a shot glass…” Now that line made the poem in my opinion. Bravo as always, Fia.
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Thank you, Daniel;))
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Read MoreCommunity- Comradery - CommentsWriting, putting the work in & finally posting so others can read it, can be a bit unnerving. One of the goals of StarsRite is to become a community that communicates!Poetry is subjective to the interpretation...
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.