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Read MoreOnce Upon a Midnight sky A rendezvous between you and I A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...
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Thank you, M.E I love Poe.;))
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a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world-
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You already do.xoxo
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Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶
With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.
Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.
“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌-
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Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal
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You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨
We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍
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Read MoreG o l d e n W o r d sO’ that I were handsome,buff as I want to be,I’d sweep you off your feet …steal all your love for me.I’d be there beside you,listening to your woes,offering soft...
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That is beautiful. I do not see where you can improve on that.
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Hi, Fia! 🌸
How wonderful to hear your sweet voice this morning, sharing the loveliness of approval for this rather romantic little poem.
You truly are appreciated and enjoyed! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Ohhh, Adira,
You’ve taken a second bite’a my apple this morning 🍎
First, S i m p a t i c o … now, this!Welcome back, Dear Poetess À Moi 🌺
With such effulgent sentiments, it’s no wonder the bouquet of your utterances have left a hopeful bard yearning the gentle touch of your satin caress.Ahhh, that “she” were more truth than fiction, what succulently delightful splendor such a blessing would be.
Thank you, Lady Adira, ever-so warmly, for sharing your lovely presence and encouraging accolades!
Mornin’ hugs to Thee! ⁓ Rascal🖌 -
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I’ve yet to see someone of your caliber when it comes to poetry, Richard. Your professionalism stands out.
A great offering my friend. 🙂-
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And, my very excellent, longtime friend, I thank you most gratefully for bestowing such a high caliber review upon this romantic little homage.
Gosh, Tim!
I must apologize for missing your inspiringly gracious review … but, I’ve quit receiving email notices from SR on reviews and messages, etc.I’ve always enjoyed whatever you share with me! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Read MoreIt's been locked away for so longYou're asking me to allow you the keyTo push open the door that's so strongLetting you see what can never beDo you hear the thud, thud, thudDo you know what it could beDo...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Read More. . . S i m p a t i c o . . .It’s written, "Those who don’t care whywill never know what’s realnor find compatibility,but only to conceal."Conceal what’s true within their heartsthat share what others might,such peace of mind and sanitythat comes with great insight.Insight...
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Greetings, Adira 🥀
Thank you for your time taken to read and review this rather poignant piece in homage to a failed romance.
The verse you’ve selected to highlight (I think) is the core of this work … good eye and insight in understanding it’s significance.Your praise inspires me, too … hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Read MoreG i r l ⁓Flows slowly smooth, cool crystal rills,chaste wonders form a young girl's truth.Ripples flowing, sun’s spark’ling glints …pure innocence ~ sweet thoughts of youth.Softly satin, her innocence,through eyes that tenderness conveys;thoughts...
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This is sweet. You capture innocence seen on a young girl from a males pov. Enjoyed this
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Thank you sincerely, Fia 🌾
I’m so very pleased you found favor and enjoyment in this poetically masculine version of a few moments in a young girl’s blossoming.
Your words inspire me.
Hugs ‘n happy blessings! ⁓ Richard🍃
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A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)