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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
Hello, Stars Rite members. This is another episode of the news.
It has come to my attention that even though we want to promote inclusivity on this site, intolerance and inappropriate verbiage of a person’s work to cause unease intentionally will not be tolerated.
We can make this site a little more comfortable for those individuals who…Read More
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Hoi hoi
As long as you remember my nameI will always be content with just being.
Ahhhh…., the beauty of simplicity!
The cherry on the cake!
Thank you!
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! What can I say? This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The one before the few or the many. Individuals, in the knowing, are complexities. Well worth the read 🌼
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I don’t need anybody to remember my name, myself. As long as my words reached something in them in recognition. I’m happy to let others have the limelight 😊
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Your words display your humanity and some vulnerability. Yet, there’s also a warm heart behind all that beating.
Beautifully done, Fia.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend, with dark vibes very present. Appreciate you.
Damian
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G’Mornin’, Fia 🌤️
Good title, and what a great lead-in with V1’s frustrating contradictions setting the mood for what’s to come (L2, make it “you’re” sad).
Boy howdy! You sure know how to express the angst so many of us have had to endure and overcome; yet, it seems some never do … sadly so.You’re such a creative writer, Ria: I admire your keen ability to weave vivid imagery and emotion throughout every verse and in the use of spot-on rhymes, timely line-breaks, and smooth flow.
Excellent wrap-up verse, too. For rhyme’s sake with “despair,” consider using “there” rather than “here” (just a thought).“Wake, wake from this despair! (great poe-esque touch)
It is me you’re talking to …
no one else is there.”Fia, you’re such a joy to read and share with. 🌈
Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard🖌 -
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian