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Read MoreI jut out from the long black seama shiny thing, unlike any other in the shaft.Just a speck of brightness,a stark contrastin the endless darkness.I know I'm different.Always have been.The black seam dominates everything down herewith its drab, dour,...
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. A diamond in the rough so to speak kinda vibe. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Marvelous…
Wonderful wordplay…
Perfect ending…
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Read MoreHoi hoi!An American friend wrote beautiful poems/lyrics for songs that didn’t happen.I thought it would be a very nice idea to change that.Plus, I could never write such a romantic poem!Listen closely please, this is romantic love!Not between Faith...
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This is so beautiful, I can see why you both were complimented.
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Chère F.,
Thank you so very much for your listen!
It really means a lot!
Faith and I salute you!Warm regards, Gus
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This is really a fruitful and beautiful collaboration! The poem is intense and lovely, the music as always skillfully and artistically composed and arranged. Both of you did a wonderful job!
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Chère S.,
Hope this finds you well.And I love it very very much that you took the time to listen (and read).!
This is what dream pop/shoegaze is all about. Why treat the voice differently than any other instrument?
I’m looking forward to writing lots of music and hopefully another coop with you!
Also on behalf of Faith Maree, grateful for your listen.
Warme Wellen (sagt GTranslate that’s when I wave to you?) und
Herzliche Grüße, Gus
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I’m looking forward to further compositions of you, dear Gus! Of course, i would also appreciate a further collaboration with you.
In German there is a big difference between the substantive and the verb.
The wave = die Welle
To wave at someone = jemandem zuwinken. In German you can simply say
Herzlich (Warmly),
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Great collab. This is beautiful.
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Hi Kay
We’re grateful for you listen and comment.
Much appreciated!
Kind regards, Gus
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Read MoreThere is an inner storm brewing Moving through the heart, mind and soul And those tempting thoughts are strewing On the verge of losing control The heart wants it bad piece by piece The soul burns slowly with passion While the mind fights pursuing peace Machinations...
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. It’s one my more recent and I was trying to stay close to meter and shorter syllable counts but I like it.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Very heartfelt write my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThe originating fire of creationReaches into the depths of imaginationWhen an innovative idea is trappedLike faraway music lost in a fogIn the distance I hear the prologueMagical ingenuity awaits to be tapped It lingers dormant with intentionAnticipating the flash of...
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The rhythm of this piece is nice.
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Thanks Fia.
It’s an older piece and one of my favorites. I’ll be including it when I publish one of poetry books.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian I try my best.
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