Powerfully penned, Keith. You gotta draw a line somewhere. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Well, you should not have to give that part of you up. Keep writing.

Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you my friend. You rock!!

Its amazing how love can cut so deep that you can’t take the knife out if you tried. Love this

OH MY FUCKING GOD YES! I have this in my word list — I keep a list on my phone notes of words that tingle: Schadenfreude, Bifurcate, Aposematic, Etiology… so the title drew me in.

And good goddamn you told the story in lyric. IT WAS SO GOOD.

This was a standout. This was the stanza that made me come back three times:
there’s a particular beauty
to watchin someone burn
inside their own bullshit
the way the smoke
keeps spellin their name
long after everythin else forgets it

THE WAY THE SMOKE KEEPS SPELLING THEIR NAME?! That is brilliant and I’m in love with the image.

Really well penned.

Betty

aprreciate you Damian. like when get to see what parts stood out.

You nailed this one. Well said & well received.

Mic Drop!

Love the picture and the word execution. Perfect