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Thank you my friend.xo
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Simple and to the point. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes!! Very simple and to the point. Thanks
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Read MoreI'm living on an excuseThe night destroys meSo much of nothing racing through my mindI lie to continue each dayNo one knows what I mean but meIf you were to hold my hand,There would be no emotion, no warmthThere's...
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Dark poem and interesting end question. Would you enter if I were to lock you in my prison? We all have our own prisons at some point in time. to enter someone else’s is …would be difficult. Good piece.
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I’m not sure if I would enter anyone’s prison. I don’t want to enter my own! Thanks Fia for the awesome comment.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Some questions have complicated answers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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They sure do. Thanks Damian.
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The audio, the image and of course the poem is perfect in it’s delivery and meaning. So much pain and sorrow pour out of this one. Nice work PG. xo
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Thank you Keith. xx
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The odds are never in your favor trying to save a broken individual, someone that someone else broke. What good to existence is two broken individuals? You’ll never be a pair, a pair of what kintsugi or mosaic pieces. Many will relate to this because of human’s diamond in the rough complex. We’ve all tried to save a destined train wreck, Tight
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True enough…maybe I just suffer from a savior complex..even after being let down multiple times. I guess I never learn my lesson. Thanks for reading. xx
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Maybe all of the broken hearted do
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It’s true
I’m a healer and I can’t resist the broken or else I’m just drawn to what I suffered and I try to teach by experience. Call me a mentor or just call me for dinner. Yin gets Yang.
Sometimes I’m successful and other times not.Never feel bad for trying PG.
I feel yaX
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Thank you PS. As always you are appreciated dear. xx
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Your voice and your words were just beautiful.
In my experience, the healers of this world were once the broken.They are the only ones that can heal the broken.
I don’t know if I’m a healer or not but my favourite saying is “don’t let anyone suffer alone”. So,I help where I can and sometimes I get hurt but helping is a joyous experience and far outweighs the hurt.
Hope that makes sense.
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It does Peter, thank you. I just have this thing of trying to see the best in people. And I want to help, but it’s exhausting when they don’t try to help themselves.. it might be foolish. But call me a fool.. I’ll never stop trying. Thanks for your kind words and wisdom. xx
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hello lovely poetic one I feel your deep ache and passion…this is so beautiful in its pain and truth ❤️
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Thank you beautiful soul. I appreciate it. xx
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Powerfully penned, PG. This one pulls at the old heart strings my friend. Excellent write and your narration sends the message home. Healers are often the ones most subject to getting hurt, we sacrifice ourselves and our needs by always putting them on the back burner to help others, especially in our relationships. I speak from my own experience but it sounds like you’ve been there too. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for reading my friend!! It’s sad that so many can relate..but lets us know that we are truly not alone..
xx
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Read MoreIt’s dark. And as much as I am into kinks, This is all new to me... Blinded by mere cloth Restraining my vision Yet my senses, Are heightened I’ve never felt so alive Every hair on my skin Is standing up on end... But I eagerly...
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WOW! This poem sizzles right before my eyes. I have a boat ready to sail. Let’s do this! xox
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Hehe, thank you Keith. xx
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Oooo man that ending. That was good. I enjoyed how you took us into the contemplation of the act.
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Fia I’m delighted you enjoyed 😊 xx
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Some folks have all the fun but there is always a price to pay.
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You’re so right Peter, we can worry about that price when it’s time to collect though. Let’s enjoy it while it lasts!! xx
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Passionately penned, PG. Excellent write my friend your imagery is precise and alive. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s the goal, dear Damian. To paint vivid imagery for everyone to see. Much thanks my friend. xx
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Chère P.G.,
The boat is the cherry on the cake.
Love your write!
I’ll be back for an eyeful of beauty!
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Gus, sincere thanks. See you again soon. xx
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You can always create something steamy Lady, great imagery
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Read MoreThe soughing whispers of the Damned Bleed across this dying land And I will never see your face again.
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This feels like the opening of a horror poem. Nicely done
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Thanks for reading
Regards James
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powerful poem dearest James ❤️
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Dear K,
For me, I appreciated the sense of loss in such brevity. Those quiet whispers in nature say so much if only I could understand the language. Terrific write. H🌷
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Thanks for reading.
There is a magic on the wind through trees and waves and grass
regards
james
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great write ❤️