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Read Morea thousand kisses deep intheebbofhissmilei am drowning,inathousandkissesdeep.
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Thank you most kindly, Roma. I’m discovering more and more transplants from the WC everyday…feels wonderful, too!
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I echo the comment above. Great poem, Kelly.
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Hi Tim! I never really thanked you for being the first to tell me about “Stars Rite”. I checked it out because of you and Sam. I’ll always remember the kindness. Thank you!
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My pleasure, Kelly. My time at WC is basically over so it’s good to see you and other friends from there on here. If I pop in to WC it’s probably to grab a few poems. 🙂
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Charlie was there yesterday. The “online writer’s” feature had his face in the place. Lol, I guess he gave it a reboot, because it’s all up and running again. You should go back and get while the getting is good!
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I’ll think about it. 🙂
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
this reads like a melody of passion I can feel it ❤️
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Passion is the one thing this world could use a little more of. I try to compose it into as much of my poetry as I can. Thank you for acknowledging that…and nice to meet you!
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![Profile picture of Betty Hermelee]()
I love this post Kelly; it is absolutely dreamy in a sensual ambience….
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Thank you, Betty! Feels good to have familiar faces looking back at me as I type!
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Short and perfectly sweet Kelly
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My forte is writing with a brevity of words. Thank you, Peter. So nice to meet you!
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Wow, that is a smile
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Thank you so much, Fia. I was surprised to find you’ve been a writer at the WC for some time, that our paths have never crossed till now. I find it comforting to know, as a moderator yourself, that you are also a poet, and fully understand the significance of having such a venue like this to call home. My poetry is my haven, my passion in life. Thank you for giving me a safe place to land.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Kelly. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I deeply appreciate the kindness of your words, Damian. Thank you!
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Oh’ my .. but what a way to go Kelly eh’ .. ink spilled perfectly … again .. inktoxicating poetry .. Neville 😎🍷👍
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If I only had an audience of one, I’d be content if it were you! Thanks, Nev!
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is sweet with a touch of trouble. “Red Dress” Nice
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Hi Fia! Oh yes, she was trouble! Thank you for your kind words. And thank you for this Stars Rite poetry site.
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Hi Curt,
I really enjoyed this – it has such a dreamy, floating quality, I love how it moves from the soft, floating imagery of dreams into the sudden jolt of reality. “And then you said,” ‘Hi.’” The image of a dream as “fire in a red dress dancing barefoot” is striking and memorable. It feels like a brief, beautiful moment where fantasy and reality touch. Dreams inspire me. This piece resonates with me
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Exactly RomaJ. Thank you. If I remember correctly, this dream woke me up. Unfortunately, there was no “reality” of her dancing in a red dress, barefoot or otherwise. Oh well. Dreams do inspire. It inspired this poem. Thanks again for your kind words and visit.
-Curt
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This is somewhat like Déjà vu to me. Something kind of jolts you, but in a way, you’ve felt it before.
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To be honest, I was roaming through some of my notebooks and found this poem. So in one sense, yes, there was some Deja vu involved. But it was a dream I had back then (2009) that found its way on paper.
Thank you, Tim, for your comment and perspective on this poem.
-Curt
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Curt. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian, for your wonderful comment, your visit, and your ‘welcome’ to SR. I am glad to be here. As I get more acclimated to the site, I will do a lot more reading. Reading some of your creations is near the top of the Read List.
Thanks again,
-Curt
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The imagery of drowning in a smile and being a thousand kisses deep perfectly captures the feeling of being completely swept away by someone. Great write.