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Read Moreyou place the bladein my handand somethin in your voicemakes it feel rightsomethin given just to meb/c I earned itand I…dumb enough to believe you…hold it carefulwatchin the light settlealong the surfacebefore bringin it to my mouthslowdraggin my tongue...
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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. You always deliver. Appreciate you.
Damian
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twofiftythree posted in the group National Poetry Month
the willin fool
you place the blade
in my hand
and somethin in your voice
makes it feel right
somethin given just to me
b/c I earned itand I…
dumb enough to believe you…
hold it careful
watchin the light settle
along the surface
before bringin it to my mouth
slow
draggin my tongue
along the edge
tastin what you pro…Read More -
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Read MoreOne more reason to give up on God and the Marilyn Monroe tattoo upon her thigh would peel from her skin...laughing Begging for mercy horror’caust and what price desire when her purse is empty? So far, so fast, so fierce singing ‘auf wiedersehen’ to the last of the international Berlin...
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The man of her dreams is sad and alone because of his drug addiction. Choices one makes…right.
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Dear R,
This for me, makes me think of all the relationships that want desperately to succeed but are doomed from the start. Especially the ones fueled by addiction. The edgy gritty feel throughout this write is relatable for anyone trapped inside this carousel nightmare. I like the dark fast pace of this write. H 🌷
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Powerfully penned, Ghosteen. Another excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re rather the pain instead of the love…this shows that the comfort that can be given is a scary concept.