hello dearest poet I really enjoyed the style and subject matter here ❤️

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. This write hits like a Mack truck my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Writes like this are quite difficult for the most of us. So few even try. Yet you did and you did it very well. The rhymes are solid and well thought out. Most of the cadence is kept moving fluidly. Along with an interesting storyline to boot.
Great job here. Your efforts paid off well.

incredibly penned…compelling. your imagery captivating,
you weave words with amazing fluidity. i too very much enjoyed your topic & style.
~ chantepleure

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend there are lots of layers in your work. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tight even down to the rhyme, to cool

you’re so dark dearest Benjamin intiguing ❤️

This poem is heavy. Dark and intriguing. Nice work.

I imagine a grotto with the rocks are covered in with orange red seaweed. Then again, I see a grunion run when they come out of the sand, and the eyes look almost blue black

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian