-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Tim wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreEvery dayanother bite,another piece of my being taken.Like cloth, It shreds.Through lightning bloodmy mind mere dustat end of day.Life - the vulture,with disdainful agilitychews slowly,rips at meready to feedon my carcass.
9 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thanks for your input, Damian.
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Boom. You nailed it.
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
ha-ha thank you, Thomas.
-
-
![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
I like this! I may expound on this in a different way.
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Beat my guest. 🙂
Thanks, Paula.
-
-
![Profile picture of Paula Jobi]()
Finished it. It’s entitled Alzheimer’s and it will be posted tomorrow sometime around noon. My first posting tomorrow and it will be dedicated to you.
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Then I’ll be reading it. Thank you, Paula. ; )
-
-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
You wove this metaphor brilliantly my friend. Great raw poetry that holds nothing back. Great work my friend.
John
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Tim wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreIn my attic, in a dust-Leadon trunk,I found an old red jacket.It bore wrinkles and smelled of mothballs.In one pocket, I found an old smile.But in the burdensome years since I last wore it I found it no longer...
11 Comments-
![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
I enjoyed this immensely.
👍-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thank you Peter.
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
I appreciate the comment, thank you.
-
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Tim this is beautiful I enjoyed the metaphors here… I don’t know how to stop hoping no matter what I pray you find belief an understanding of God as I have found him truly to be I looked at church and never found him there… then my scope widened and I found him everywhere ❤️
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thank you for the comment, Crimsin. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Man, I love the part where you found an old smile. The whole piece is great but something about those two words together made me smile. And no, it’s not old! lol
It gave ma a feeling of nostalgia. Wonderful write amigo!
Thanks for posting.-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thanks so much Adel. :)))
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work.
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Thanks Thomas.
-
-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Tim, this read like a man on a quest to find the joy he once had. You took this metaphor and flew with it my friend. I could visualize the old red jacket in the trunk and you finding it and looking in the pockets for what once was. Truly great work.
John
-
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
Crimsin wrote a new post
![]()
Read Moregentle understanding, in your depths I searchto find a way to reconcilethe wild ways of the world and your nature Fatherinside me is conflicting feelingscreative need, you admonish me you prefer my softer sidecruel desire is the way of...
7 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
It is very bewitching. When he tells you to stay calm so his monster does not come out. nice
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello lovely Fia he told me last night after I posted my poem he said he knows I am capable of this mischief but he prefers my softer side…I asked him further about his varied sides and he says it’s all in what side I provoke will I get from him thank you for reading and commenting ❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Crimsin, both tender and fiery this poem is. He tries to elicit your soft side but his true nature brings out the lioness. Great poem as I have come to expect from you.
John
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Brilliant work. Powerful.
-
![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Brenda, you amaze me with, “of others playing on different courts.” Love that line.
-
![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
A lovely & fragile piece of poetry Brenda. You always seem to amaze. Great work here.
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Tim wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreStress encircled her eyes. When any hope was hopelessand light-years away,she opened her dresser drawer. Beneath lengthypharmacy referralsand exponential credit card billsthe black metal trigger resembledthe color of a raven. At the speed of lightand with enough energyto cross the expanse of...
7 Comments-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
No, hope, could not find a way out of everything.
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Sadly no. Thanks for the comment, Fia.
-
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
It is sad but you ended it with a bang. I love that you used the word stardust!
Even though she was tortured, you made her sparkle at the end.
Well done!-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
Nice observation Adelly. Thank you for the comment. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Tim. Not every write has a happily ever after. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
I’m glad you liked it. Thanks Damian. 🙂
-
-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Tim, this was softly explosive. Like a dream that comes true in a dark and sad way. Exquisitely written my friend.
John
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you for the good news Fia 🙏🏻
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Sorry about the issue.
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
A website is ever evolving so, no problem Fia! 💕
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
beautiful thank you ❤️
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Welcome and I do apologize
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
it’s fine I’m sure keeping this site running is tedious and as much a miss DU i’m getting the flow of this
Star ❤️
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Damian;))
-
-
![Profile picture of Neville]()
How cool is that .. I Know for a fact that besides me, there will be many others who are grateful for this update and accompanying good news .. Neville 😎👍
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thanks Neville;))
-
-
- Load More Posts
Cleverly penned, Tim. Speaking truth my friend, this has layers. Appreciate you.
Damian