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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Thank you
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You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
YEAH, ya killed it!
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such an amazing tribute my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Really sad piece and we could see this while reading, Sad Lady
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This is so very touching, Brenda.
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thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
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You are very welcome.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write that pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply ❤️
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Writing helps, remembering happy thoughts are healthy, suppressing afraid of darkened pain is a negative. Be healthy Lady and never forget, just don’t live in the pain
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thank you dearest Me I sometimes feel I felled him it is an overwhelming feeling ❤️
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Bravo, Fia. You know how to tell a story my friend. This is really good, can’t wait to hear more. Take a bow!! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊 working on the next part
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
Never hearing your voice before, Fia 👀👂
I did not know what to expect, but I can’t say I’m disappointed in any way … actually, I was quite taken with how smoothly soft ‘n sultry, creamy ‘n smooth it is, as though my mind was being caressed through my ears on a warm, gentle breeze by a hundred dandelion flowers.
I heard no reason for the “Adult” sticker … YET, anyway. Now, at least, I’m prepared for any sweetly naughty surprise one might hope for!. ; p
Anyone ever tell you you’re a VERY talented lady?
YEP! That’s my outlook! ⁓ Richard🖌-
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Thank you, Richard. I put the adult sticker because I figured I might as well start from the beginning. lol
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Hmmm?
Gonna keep us hangin’ in suspense, eh?-
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Working on it. Had a head cold. I Sound nasally
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Ohhh, NO, Fia!
Don’t tell me you normally sound like Betty Boop? 🙄
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Amazing! You’re a talent!
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Read MoreWe roam On the pavements of the Earth Riding the buses of the world Weaving in and out Of the fingers Into the palms Of the thieving hands Above Long drilling nails Dug into this land Scratching at the soul
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Interesting the way you put it. Stealing from the earth, taking from Mother Nature.
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Thanks for reading
It’s a dark one.
Regards
James
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More