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Read MoreHow to Get ElectedBy FlatDaddyIt takes big buckscause the luck's with the cluckswith the cash,the stash of tucks in the pocket.That's the socket, the clock to set therocket of success,luck's bestwith big bucks sucked in trucked inshucked an' jivedby...
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Ah, thank you! Did you play the audio? I need to redo it, but it’s not too bad.
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I listened to the audio and it sounded great to me. Lots of rhythm.
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Oh, good. I still need to fix it though (it’s missing a word I had to add after Trump took the throne, er, office.)
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haha, well then get that word in flat daddy. One word might not make a difference unless it’s a real good one. 🙂
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Oh, yes! The word is “nay” — it wasn’t in there before. I won’t tell you where (oh, boy, a treasure hunt!), but once you find it, you’ll understand why I had to add it. So now I must add it to the audio — which, of course, requires doing it again.
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I wish you luck in your endeavor. 🙂
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Thanks, Tim
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Super cool and fun poetic satire on the cash that floats our politicians. Buying elections with the telegenic looks and velvet tongue has been going on for a long time. Great poem.
John
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Ah, yes, and I find it strange for that very reason that I did not go into politics myself; it’s too bad my mirror does not agree. Damn lying glassy two-dimensional things that populate every bathroom I’ve ever been in. Who put those damn things there? Certainly not me! Thanks for the nice comments, John.
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Read Moreinside I crash into your energysmashing, cunted brillianceshining danger I can't resistinfidelity of the soulmy honesty is invaded by your darknessit seeps into my sorrowyour marred imageit makes me flinch what you call goodmiserable truth I hate the feelingof...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Love the depth and layers in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian forgive my late response I find myself slipping of as of late ❤️
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Read MoreShe left without a goodbye.As though our nest was no longercomfortable enough for her. As though from a high perchshe saw something, or someone,better than meand flew off. But life is funnyand often horrific. They found her among the reeds.Some human animal...
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. 🙂
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hello dearest Tim this is very dark great write ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin.
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Wow! The whole write is moving but the line about having her wings plucked and her breath made off with, great metaphors for death. You have a great talent mister!
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Thank you, my beautiful friend. 🙂
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Read MoreTHE WALK HOME There's a cool breeze...chilling me to the bone...it's gonna rain tonight...I'm walking home cause -I've only pennies in my pocket.I just want my lumpy bed.Severe weather just ahead. I know the way all too well.I've walked these streets......for...
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Read MoreThey flee and fly like jostling birds - or gray moths 'round a light. They pirouette in lazy rings - while frolicking in flight. Like gypsies, leaves will soon depart with tender thoughts for wind Soon to sweep and persevere - in lives undisciplined. Some will scurry...
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That’s very good Tim….very good
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Thanks very much, Peter.
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Sensational imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much, Damian. 🙂
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hi dearest Tim I loved the imagery ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin.
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I like how the poem captures the restless, whimsical dance of leaves…it’s vivid and alive. I feel a shiver reading it, both from its beauty and the fluttering imagery– of moths (which terrifies me! Lol ), yet it’s utterly stunning. The gentle, swirling cadence and the soft rhymes make the poem feel as airy and unpredictable as the leaves themselves, perfectly echoing their flight.
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Thanks so much for a great review, Romaj. 🙂
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The dance of the leaves as they pirouette to the ground is such a welcomed sight to see. Beautiful capture of such a wonder of nature. Good to see you here, Tim!
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Thanks Kelly. 🙂
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Very entertaining! I don’t trust politicians no matter who they are.