Im so sorry to hear you’re going through all of that. You want you write horror go ahead. There are a few people on here that love it.

It wouldn’t be all horror.

First reading of your predicament, super sorry to read of this. But hopefully your surgeries are successful and we get a new Paula with a totally new poetic vision.

I like steak well done, but the current steak situation…inedible, unpalatable and unacceptable. Perfectly executed

I agree with Willow. Well done meat but our current situation is beyond repair. Nice work!

We as a nation have had tough times in the past, but I can totally understand your sentiments. Everyone is getting on the same wavelength. We all know things aren’t going good. There are many factors involved to.

Well said!

For a moment we was like this is a fed up person, then this person has been flocked, nothing but sheep. Tight

I smell a Pavlovian steak!! Well done, Fia! “)

Mic drop, Cuz!

It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

This is a very reflective piece.

I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.

I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.

This is a dark but incredible read. x