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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Fia he made me smile so I thought I would share it thank you❤
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. They’re amazing like that, a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreFueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see Face...
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Great!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is really good. Damian <3
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work. Superb.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.
The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Neville]()
Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Neville]()
My pleasure entirely .. 👍
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Atticus Abbey]()
Fantastic!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you beautiful ❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work. Superb.
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thank you dearest Thomas ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.
Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
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thank you graciously dearest Jacob ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
thank you dearest Benjamin that is beautiful to me ❤️
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability
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thank you graciously dearest RPM ❤️
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
Terrific write
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hello dearest Benny thank you graciously❤
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![Profile picture of Jacob erin-cilberto]()
we own our choices good or bad. And for those we regret, we can ask forgiveness and do what we can of good deeds to even up the ledger. Similar to what the Chorus in Oedipus spoke of at his end.
Fate took him in one direction…he attempted to take himself as far as he could in the other before his death.
Really good piece.
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hello dearest Jacob I do my best and it is hard to let go of regret but I ask forgiveness and I do try to focus on being positive thank you for your thoughts on this❤
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![Profile picture of RPM]()
I really appreciate an honest piece like this. The inner monologue was captivating. Thanks for sharing it.
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thank you graciously dearest poet I often do that I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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crimson, this is sweet. I understand how you feel