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Read MoreStill Cold Under The CoatOh’ my love,how I must have changedsince we last failed and so conspicuously ..You neverfaltered though or pausednor turnedaround for a final backward glance did you ..Oh’ and neither did you dropeither of thoseelegant gloves...
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Thank you kindly Damian 😎👍
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Tremendous work.
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Good of you to stop by Thomas .. Cheers, Neville 😎👍
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Read MoreThey tell the story of a maiden.Some say she was as fair as can be.Some say she was young. Or died as old as one can be.They say one day,her soul fell into a deep sleep.For nights on end,she would...
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Tight rhyming
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Damian DeadLove and
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Could feel the hurt in your words my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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An awesome, bittersweet and heart touching poem, dear Crimsin! Brilliantly written!
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Most excellent, my friend. Keep on touching my heart.
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How is it fair to find the perfect one so long after finding your one true love, is it fate showing a sense of humor, Tight
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Brilliant
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Beautiful. Only you can write these sad pieces with such delicate precision.
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Read MoreWith stars concealed in the sky, it's getting near midnight here on the train platform. The air is slightly damp, and the station lights have a misty aura. The rain's barely even falling yet.From a metal bench, I keep...
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Passionately penned, Tim. Great storytelling my friend with a very relatable story. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
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Brilliant work.
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Thanks Thomas.
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There’s nothing wrong with this, so i don’t know what you were wary of?
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I don’t think they’ll be a part 2. lol but thanks for the comment, Styx. 🙂
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I’m glad to see it end on a happy/hopeful note. Having been a lonely guy many times, I’d say this fellow’s thinking is right on. I’ve always thought there must be lonely lady for me out there somewhere, if only we could meet. Nice writing–I like your stories.
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Thanks Sam. I’ve been lonely so long it kind of wore out. lol Glad you’re here. Tim (Relic).
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Tim, you painted loneliness in the city with brilliant brush strokes here, in an emotional train ride that will not be soon forgotten by me. This is what great prose can do. it is felt deep down in my heart and soul.
John
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Beautifully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian