This brought a tear to my eyes. This was well written and conveyed your point beautifully.

A deep connection on so many levels.

Damn, this is good. Good advice for someone who needs to see this.

Gritty and sharp. Excellent.

This is very open love this line “Sometimes I like the beat of your every word, Other times I like to think on your every word”

Look how far she had to go to find her life. This is dark because it is real. Nicely penned

Real life is always so much more darker kinda like Brenda’s Got A Baby real. Thank you Lady

Some times that hard lesson in life will wake a motherfucka up real quick.

Well done, Brenda. I like this.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, I know what it’s like to sing the blues. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère C.,
Breath everyday – write everyday.
But then, i don’t have this nice artwork.
With the whole picture you draw me in.

Keep on keeping on, said Curtis.
Warm regards, Gus

Powerful work. Excellent.

You’ve strung together the notes of pain very well. Perhaps singing the blues can be just as cathartic as writing about them. We can only hope.

Those solem moods are tricky. We can’t always keep them locked down. And then others feel the dark coolness of their touch. Beautifully written, Brenda 🧡