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I appreciate the read and the comment, Fia. I am happy you enjoyed both!
Thank you for stopping by.
Clay
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great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, my friend! It was a gorgeous day and place that inspired it.
I appreciate you taking the time.
Clay
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Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!
You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
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Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.
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Thank you, Visions_of_Insanity, you captured this poem’s spirit perfectly. I keep wishing I could return to that afternoon!
I appreciate the visit
Clay
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Read MoreMirislavka Without any doubt all the village boys wanted her .. Those with a pulse, pubes and piercings did anyway .. The rest were either far too young, or too old to even contemplate what they each knew to be unobtainable .. Even those feral twins who every now and...
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Desire and lust–she certainly has the right stuff to stir emotions and fan passionate flames inside of boys, men, and grandpas who ain’t dead yet. She reminds me of the gas station owner’s wife who’d sell us boys cokes and peanuts, then send us away with big lumps in our pants. (Through no fault of her own–all she did was make change and smile) Thoughts of your Mirislavka will be with me all day.
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Bless you Sam you just made this old fella’s day .. Kindest of regards, Neville 😎👍
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Passionately penned, Neville. Excellent write with brilliant detail and wonderful storytelling my friend. Outstanding work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Many thanks Damian .. sentiments reciprocated .. Neville 😎👍
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Read MoreSometimes I wake up in eternal darkness.And I really wish to escape.All the plans and memories that fade. That distract me from my loneliness and woe.They protect me from war and foe.Slowly over the years,the sun slowly got brighter. But it...
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Read Moredeep I go and deeper stillcultivating sadness it shines inside of me why deny itsweet melancholy serenades in the shadowsquietly I play my melodymetiqulously I climb the notes into my black dintheir is cackling accompanied by whispersthe horde reside...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Thia is a deeply moving poem, Crimsin. I felt especially those last 3 line. And the music made the poem more real to me, more tragic. To desire death, yet condemned to life, where only sadness can be found. And yet, there is also the deeply felt desire to be “understood”. Crimsin, you may not want anyone in your “onyx tower”, but your poem calls to us nonetheless. Is this not an invitation to at least feel your words?
You write powerfully, Crimsin.
Curt
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hello dearest Curt of course it is I hope to move always that you got it makes me happy thank you ❤️
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Read MoreI have a therapist.She's been withme since birth.Watercolors on mysoul.She spills black, andblue; sometimesred.Blood is tobright on the whitepage.I blush for theboth of us.When all is out forthe caged moments,I collapse and rest.I dream in metaphors,and I taste thesweetness...
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Hey I think you might well have cracked it Thomas .. You may be able to break an egg but you can’t beat a symbiotic bond now can ya squire .. This is smashing and has your literary DNA running right through it .. Neville 👍😎👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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Stimulating, intriguing, well said and creative. Great!
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Thank you.
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The pic drew us in but we read this twice and this right here , “obscure memories of
vaginas long gone.” We like this dude-
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Much appreciated.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend, you hit this one out of the park. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Thank you so much.
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The irreplaceable mistress. What would we do without her? I hit “tangerines and treehouses” and actually squealed! Brilliantly written, Thomas.
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You are the best. Thanks.
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I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.