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Thank you Damian, You are right. This was inspired by darker moments in my life.
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hello beautiful Jade this is some fine poetry allowing me to feel your depths 💕
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Thank you kindly Brenda. Sometimes I really get into deep emotions…and I pen it out.
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I assure you we are not the only ones. I have not healed completely but this heart of mine is pretty resilient. Thank you for reading.
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Thank you Visions, your comments are much appreciated.
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Read MoreYou have releasedthe Kraken.The mighty eye opens,thrusting to the swelling surface.I come for you in waves,fists strapped to the starboard bow.Your tentacles are drapedlike twisted sea dreadsswaying across your varnished shoulders.I am the captain’s daughter.You are the mutiny of...
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You come up with fantastic imagery
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Thanks, girl! I like the ocean. I was a pirate in another life.
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You nailed it.
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I’m glad you think so, Thomas. Thank you!
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Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!
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LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?
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I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.
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Read MoreThis is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this  I must hand this in  The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with  A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...
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I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
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Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
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Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
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Thank you, Brenda
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Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)-
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Thank you, M.E
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Read MoreLead on,brave steed,up ambled stairs,this musky room,abrupt with noise.Let's climb until we find our chairsabove the sea of girls and boys.The very back... that's what I like.It's where we fuck on Friday night! Just take a seat beside me here.I'll...
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Poweful work and great rhyme. Excellent.
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Thank you so much, Thomas!
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Thanks, girl! I like to make my own entertainment when the lights go down!
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Read MoreI want a new world todayI want to see and explore itAs I have funIn the discovery Tm.
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Your comments are like hugs for me. Thank you. Love and hugs. ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Jade. Some dark undertones on this one, a fantastic read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian