Beautifully penned, LDF. Another stellar write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Funny immediately I thought of the Diddy trial that is going on. This is a strong poem and makes you take pause. Nice. ;))

Mic Drop!

You nailed it.

I can read the morrison vibes in these verses. A well written Ode! “)

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yes, the late Val Kilmer, was able to capture the essence of Jim. He also sang all the concert footage in the film. They were revolutionary indeed. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I really loved the ending dearest Damian yes powerful words and I love and still love Jim as I shake the cotton from my brain…great write and dedication ❤️

You capture Jim very well here. Excellent work.

There was just something about artist of that time that was just magical. Great tribute.

This had the cadence of a song to it. His influence drifting through you, perhaps? What a great ode to your inspiration, my friend

Still lighting our fire ….

BIG LIKE

Beautifully penned, P.G. The plot thickens, I like the shift in perspective, a different character a different point of view. Also reveals information to fill in the gaps between characters that only the reader is privy to, nicely done. Great flow on the information in the dialogue revealed by Mr. Knight. I think you’re a natural at this writing thing. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much, Keith. That means everything when you are constantly floating in a sea of uncertainty. xx
~P.G💋

Line and sinker.. I’ll make sure to keep reeling you in, Adira 😉 xx
~P.G💋

Ooo she is in his sights. I love the devilish demeanor he has.