A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)

When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it

I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.

The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
I hope that there is success from your dilemma soon!

An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.

I digs this

Much respect

Naaj

Superb work.

Outstanding! One of the best poems I’ve read all n starsrite… and I mean that. Into the list it goes! Will be checking out your other work.

Daniel

Echo the others
This is how erotica is written

Bravo !

I steer clear of porn for the most part. But this is not that. It has taste and intrigue. It’s a thoroughly enthralling read. Well done.

Passionately penned, RPM. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This was a moment in time, very precious, captured beautifully

Thank you so much. I am very grateful for the comment!

” The years had left some tangled vines—
But still, tonight, they chose to choose.”

Mic drop.

Much respect

Naaj

We have no choice but to be here ..

Poets write sometimes in order to avoid Last Rites

BIG
LIKE

Read twice
Hit me different second time around as the bartender was calling for last round ..

Like PoetSpeak, I read this one twice. It has the feeling of a bell rolling in the mist. That question at the end…if you get an answer, I would like in on the knowledge

Powerfully penned, Cipher. This is a deep write my friend, lots of layers. Appreciate you.

Damian

‘Light lies
in
bright
eyes. Captured in forward and backward enrapture. The light
of
life. The seeming meaning
in the
dreaming. ‘
A core of words needing a home, thoughts laid, meanings personal yet to share. Takes hold on the second read.

Right from the X posts to the Headlines. Radical right meets radical left – everyone in between pays the price! I’m going to end here but I’m coming back with a link to one I wrote.

Feel The Noise

Damian great write but the buffoons that run the world aren’t listening.
Too busy making money by any means possible.
Lies have become the truth and truth lies.
Orwell saw it coming.

It doesn’t surprise me that rich people try to screw over the poor. What surprises me is how many people are so happy to get screwed while complaining that they have hard lives. They want war. They want blood because some people disagree or just tell them reality. It’s wild.

Great ink

“To live outside the law you must be honest”

…….. bob dylan

Song: Absolutely Sweet Marie

When there’s so words of my own to describe something I go back to the Master

That’s happening a lot lately …

I believe this one will only continue to become more relevant as long as they wealthy hold the keys to freedom. Unfortunately. An reverse Robin Hood situation we got going on. I swe things happening & quietly write down my suspicion on their next crime. I wish I wasn’t right so often. And you…prophet. I hope it’s not too late & the scales can still be tipped, my friend

Superb work.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Damn, Fia. Straight up fire on this spill my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Ick

Now that’s a visual

Uh No

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Wow! I wonder if I could seize that anger? That is very powerful! I might give an angry piece a try. Mine is usually of the “woe is me” variety. Very powerful!

I dedicated my first post today to you…
Anger!