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Crimsin wrote a new post

• 8 months ago

ma

Poetry, Spirituality, Uncategorized

December 5, 2025

7

sadness like a fog has settled indespondent and withdrawn I interact almost not at allanxiety swells and I grievethe pain of loss never goes awaythe moments inbetween is all I haveso tonight I turn the music upthe tunes my...

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7 Comments
- Atticus Abbey
  8 months ago
  
  This is so very touching, Brenda.
  - Crimsin
    8 months ago
    
    thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
- Atticus Abbey
  8 months ago
  
  You are very welcome.
- Damian DeadLove
  8 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write that pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    8 months ago
    
    thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply ❤️
- I_IS_ ME
  8 months ago
  
  Writing helps, remembering happy thoughts are healthy, suppressing afraid of darkened pain is a negative. Be healthy Lady and never forget, just don’t live in the pain
  - Crimsin
    8 months ago
    
    thank you dearest Me I sometimes feel I felled him it is an overwhelming feeling ❤️
Amethyste wrote a new post

• 8 months ago

Together

Poetry

December 5, 2025

2

I wonder what you are doing nowAre you getting boredLike I am nowYou in the hostelAnd I here in the barIn the middle of the nightIt would be less lonelyIf we were together.

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2 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  8 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend. Your style feels like observational wisdom at its finest. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Amethyste
    8 months ago
    
    Thank you for reading it Damian. I appreciate that.
twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”

• 8 months, 1 week ago

bi-trillets attempt. this one wasn’t easy for me…never do well when rhymin is involved.

endless night confession

breathe in the black smoke, love feels like a joke
the nights we wasted tasted strange
cheap liquor kiss, dirty exchange

you were my worst itch, struck like a kill switch
old barroom lungs in borrowed light
we swore we’…Read More

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- RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
  8 months ago
  
  A brilliant submittal, Syr Dru
  
  Congratulations on another successfully excellent effort in displaying such admirable skill in the true essence and grasp of that which is conveyed in these earnestly shared teaching sessions.
  
  Your poetic potential is second to none … this piece is spot-on in every sense of the phrase: meter, poetic voice, i…Read More
  - twofiftythree
    8 months ago
    
    I wonder if we are readin the same poem. I really expected this one to get marked up with a red pen on all the places I went wrong. I appreciate your input and the lessons you’re providin. I’ll agree with you on fixin the rhyme so I’ll add the s to pain. but you’re gonna have to pry my lowercase letters and lack of punctuation from my cold dead ha…Read More
    - RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
      8 months ago
      
      Ha-hahhhh!
      
      That’s a given, M’Friend, but I’ll never give-up on ya. 🤓
Liziantus-Marantus wrote a new post

• 8 months, 1 week ago

His Hair

Poetry, Romance, Short Stories

December 5, 2025

0

His hair is charcoal,pitch black.His hair is shiny and not matte.They say if you look upclose. You'll find the sparkling galaxy.Above with the suns,stars and planets.I know that in his hair landscape is also a moon. That glows brightly and won't...

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Amethyste wrote a new post

• 8 months, 1 week ago

Fire

Poetry

December 4, 2025

2

Talk to meA word from youLights up a fireOn this winter day.

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2 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  8 months, 1 week ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Amethyste
    8 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thank you Damian. A good day ahead for you.
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