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Read MoreI feel hotwhen the room is coldI'm still youngso why do I feel so old?my feet hurtit's hard to walkmy stomach achesI feel like I'm about to barfmy head is always killing meand my vision's blurredthe house is a...
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Excellent write my friend. It’s not fun getting old that’s for sure. Amazing flow and wordplay brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That state of overwhelmed exhaustion seems to be running rampant these days. Everyone I know is always tired and I stopped checking news…it’s so bad these days, they bring it to you. And yeah…getting old sure ain’t for sissies!
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Read Moremy somberest feelings find youwith deep affection I greettouching your depths so you will know mewading in the deep so you would see the woman before youcollecting shadows from whispersthen presenting them to you as giftssecrets of my heart...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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Sensual and somewhat sad. Well done.
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good day to you dearest Jim thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your understanding of the nuances here ❤️
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🙏💖
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Read MoreCongratulations to everyone. Thank you for your contributions to Stars Rite.Here are the links to the winners’ poems – Stars Rite
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Thanks for the info, Fia. And Congratulations to all the winners and runner ups. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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These are some excellent pieces of work. Thank you for commenting.
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Amethyste wrote a new post
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Powerful.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Hoi hoi A.,
Short but beautiful. How come only one thumb is permitted?
Keep them coming, please?
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Thank you Gus. I appreciate your feedback.
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you a lot. Hugs and love.
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hello lovely poetess it is our senses that allow us to engage with life beautiful write ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin. Have a beautiful day.
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Knight wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhen you're at the bottom of the River You can see all the way to the top It's bad manners to look down Kindness Searches For a lily pad And a flower In a torrent of scum
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Superb work, my friend.
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Thanks for reading. The subjects a bit grim.
Regards James
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It’s bad manners to look down. We still do it, though. This is good work;))
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Thanks for reading. Class is never far from my mind.
Regards James
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hello dearest James I am forever searching this is very clever and powerful ❤️
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Thanks for reading and listening. It’s means a lot. I am trying to condense my poems to thirty seconds.
Regards James
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Tremendous
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Thanks again. I am grateful for the kind words.
Regards James
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I want to say everything will become better. Being that bone aching tired, that even the doctor tells you that you are ok is relatable.
Baby steps to finding a way to feel ok.
Very open poem.