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Aww, no sad bittersweet stuff!
Okay, this is good and it hits the heart in the center. I feel it, through your words.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This write has a gentle sting to it.
You do both so well. Gentle and sting.
I love when you blend Brenda.
Just the right amount of bittersweet.Merry Christmas!
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Read MoreAs the evening stretches beyond skyscrapers sunset cracks windows and voices, midnight lies as a would-be lover counting her footsteps across Brooklyn Bridge to an anonymous apartment, where she imagines waking to her lipstick on his coffee cup Washing machine skies spin skeins of colour red always bleeds into the blue and JFK...
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Dear R,
The visual and imagined images are outstanding in this piece. For me, there such a sense of coping with life especially at Christmas. You incorporate iconic structures of NY throughout giving this an energetic current running underneath the words from start to finish. I really enjoyed seeing the people, appreciating the buildings and mostly the confessional admission within the piece. Fab write. H🌷
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As someone once sang, it’s been a good year for the roses. Heart upon heart, life below humility, Christmas 2025 once seemed a distance away. It was only true friendship & family who drove my sleigh. Maybe, one day, I will become a poem. Huge Welsh hugs and thanks H. x
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The opening catching one’s imagination as you tell us a story through poetry. I enjoyed this.
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Thank you Fia and many plaudits for your perennial encouragement of writers. Wising you a blessed yuletide.
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Well now, this is quite a large gift for us readers. Definitely weighty but not overdone. It brings so much to light, as you build the “Blade Runner” scenery throughout.
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Never considered the blade runner angle and this is why I always hope to submit on poetry sites. Everyone reads their own perspective. Thank you Mark.
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The original Blade Runner is a fantastic, epic movie. Your write belongs with it, including in value.
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Read Morelaughter of hate, inside me debating whether to stay or leavecallous affection is the affliction, as of latemorose of feeling, with lust shown for others and for me nonededicated need holds me to youa love that hurts dictates desireinside...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Heartfelt write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Chère C.,
A thumbs up from the Netherlands.
And what do the world famous Macs says?
I’m loving it.
Your writes I mean. I’m not eating the Macs.
I hope your Tuesday will be marvellous, Gus
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Read MoreIt is been a while I do not see youI do not know what you are doingI hope you are fineBut I have this little thoughtI hope, I hope..Think of me sometimes. Ok?
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hello lovely poetess I hope he or she is…
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I hope he is too. I like him very much. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. I second Brenda, I hope he or she is.. Excellent write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hello Damian. Yes I hope the same. 🙂
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Read MoreJust hear those lay bells jinglingRing-ting-tingling tooCome on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay together with you Outside the hoes are callinthey’ll be no blue ballin, "Yoo hoo"Come on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay ride together with you Get it up, get...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Only the Dr. Seuss of horror could take this Christmas classic and flip it on its head. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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I was laughing so hard at this. Really good rendition Keith;))
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Appreciate that Fia. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
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Oh what fun it is to ride!!! 😂😂😂
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Thank you Elke. Hope you had a great holiday my friend.xo
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A scorched-earth parody that weaponizes familiarity. The humor comes less from punchlines and more from how far it’s willing to push desecration of a cultural comfort song. Not subtle, but very intentional.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Chère C.,
How can you be so productive and, at the same time, be so consistent in quality?
Looks like I enjoy everything you write.
Just a note from the far away fanclub.
Warm regards, Gus