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    • Not sure if anyone remembers this song. How the words and vocals just touch something inside

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      Merry Meet

      invictus of sufferingmy soul is powerful because of thisseedy desire, reading my scars like brailleinflicted glory, they are an honor to wearfilthy weakness, when I shyundisturbed truth peeks through the mirewhere all understanding is bornfraught with painso I will...

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      ...when I only fucked women

        She came up behind me as I was taking off my makeup, and wrapped her arms around my waist. “Vienes a la cama, Amor?”  Are you coming to bed, love? I smiled and closed my eyes. She didn’t initiate often, but fuck. Just...

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      • Based on this artiusing piece, I think in my next life I’d like to be a woman.
        Great write.
        👍

      • Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.

        Damian

        • Thanks Damian. It’s so much harder for me to write this narrative voice, and I appreciate that you foind nuance.

      • Stinking, reeking, sweating womanly sex – so hot my knees are trembling!

      • Gardenias and Jasmine! Aren’t you the lucky one, girl?! Cherish the moment! Harriet-Jacqui Furl writing as HJ Furl on Amazon.

      • Why, why did this have to end? lol I know life continues but this is hot.

        • I mean, we had to work. 🙂

          When it was one of THOSE nights with the one who got away, it feels like it never ends… god above… it feels like eternity in every steaming breath. Smooth skin and soft breasts and held-breath cries… yeah. It feels forever.

          Thanks for dropping in Fia and supporting me. I don’t know what I’m doing right now, but I’m appreciative to have space to stretch my fingers and figure it out.

      • What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
        BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
        Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
        I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.

        • Bro, when I said I’d fucking take your woman from you if you were an asshole? I MEANT it. I’d totally steal your woman from you. (She’s hot!)

          Thanks. The intimacy is so, so different, and structuring it in a way that was less textbook and more opera is still challenging. I might write for my gay half for a while. (My straight half has had the shit kicked out of it for some years.)

          I don’t know what’s next as Betty. I don’t know if she has much left in the way of heady writing. We shall see.

          Love you bro. I mean, really. (Be good to your girl or else!)

      • She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.

        “Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.

      • Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight

        • Styx is seriously my brother-from-another-mother. Glad you dug it my friend. Really glad.

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      Sinking into a Cold Pulse -- with Atticus Abbey

      Your hands are a slow, deliberate scriptsnowing cold glass frozen in marroweach syllable, a fucking shardwhere my lips have beencarved into your flesh—up to my toesiesthe cunt has worn Into a hollow, seeping starepulsing for sharp kisses in the airyou...

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      Sappho (Elke) wrote a new post

      Dual Unity

        Two trees grow closely, side by side Through storms of strife and turning tide Drenched by rains of grief and gall Sun-warmed by bliss that touches all In love and strength, they stand so tall Two trees, yet forest all in all   Two birds within...

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      • Beautiful, my friend.

      • Elke…. your soul is reflected in this poem…both are beautiful.

        🙏

      • Beautifully penned, Elke. This is an amazing write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Chère S.,
        Ahhhhh, you did it again!
        Painting with Words!
        And I love the artwork too.
        Prompt writing?
        Anyway, I forget the reasoning so I can immerse myself in this warm bath.
        Herßliche, viel herßliche, Gus

      • Wonderful. You never let us down, as readers. This one is a great example of your fluid rhymes, with a powerful message carried consistently throughout it. Awesome, Elke.

      • Talking to trees, and listening to their replies, to their wisdom, is one way to understanding how all life is connected, intertwined, in a fundamental way. It is how we become more humane and how we find love. I think your poem is a testament to this, Elke.
        -Curt

        • Yes indeed, all of life is deeply interconnected. All living beings are deeply dependent on one another. Whatever happens to one species has affects on the whole planet. E.g trees have a well functioning communications system.They warn each other of danger; if it serves the well-being of the entire forest, they even help their competitors.
          ​ thank you very much for your meaningful comment dear Curt! 🌲😊

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