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Read MoreHe workedHe workedHe workedand worked He drankHe drankHe drankand drank His job wasn't to far from his homeHe would walk home the same route every dayIt wasn't the greatest neighborhoodHobo's were always near the liquor store he would stop by each...
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Hello John. Thank you so much for the read & the kind words. Appreciated.
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And the moral of the story is…..wait till your sober before going home.
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HA! Thanks Adira.
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Oh so true sire. Thanks!!
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Read MoreShe was the woman with no nameShe came in when they were leaving their offices to go home for the daySome of the staff tried to be polite and say hello in passingShe never said a word backShe would...
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You painted this picture like a scene on television. I like this.
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Thank you Fia. Appreciated!!
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You have a sensitivity and caring for this character that really must come from your compassionate soul. Loved this portrait you painted in verse.
John
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Hello John You’re comments inspire. Thanks a bunch!!
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Hello Adira. Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate you!!!
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Read More"Tie me off sweetheart", she said. Sure honey sweetie baby, I love to watch you vomit Don't get any on my shoes Oh fuck it, I'm so in love with you I even love your puke You have the...
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Thank you HJ Furl. Appreciated!
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You paint these people with unflinching description that really makes me feel for them. And there is a slightly humorous tone here which I like. Really find scenes you paint of the underworld of our cities. Love reading your poetry tonight.
John
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Correct. I’m quite satirical with my poems. Thank you very much John.
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DARK AND FEROCIOUS.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
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Appreciate that Thomas. Thanks!!
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Cipher and
Rubyredheart are now friends
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Read MoreMay Ihold you fold youmould your bodyinto mine.Will you hold me fold me mould me into the curvesof your bodyand drink me inlike some fine wine.Can we stillholdfold mouldblend into each otherand become the two colouredartwork we were always meant to be.Come to me tonight...
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My wife doesn’t get to see many of my scribblings and the ones she does she never comments on.
Anyway, I keep them all on line and hard copies in a safe downstairs so if I cark it first she’s got a lot of reading to do.
I don’t really write for anyone but myself and my crazy mind.
Hope your things are recovering well.
😘
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You told the story of this man with great power and a really strong and surprising ending. You clearly know the art of poetic story telling well.
John