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Read MoreYour love is a daggerso plunge it deep into my heart.I cannot stand and do not want mere surface.Drive your blade indont pull it out.Know that in time my heart will absorb itand absorb you. And my legs will part...
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Your smile made me smile…thanks for reading.🙏
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I enjoyed the playful, lightly sinister nature of this. Admittedly, no.. I didn’t see that couplet coming lol.
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Read Morecontemptious need flooding over my sorrownever on the morrow to be let freeit's just another day of sadnesswith knowledge, heavy privy to his holiest's feelingsbedlam vain, I am not enough, I'm afraidlike Cain before me my gratitude is given...
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Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
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hello lovely Alexandria good evening thank you most graciously for such a beautiful comment and thought 💕 I guess this was a conversation I was having with God today sometimes I feel like when he asks something of me I am ungrateful…my heart hurts over this that my first insinct is to be selfish…I truly appreciate you tonight 💕
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I don’t think you’re selfish at all. I think you’re hurting. 🕊️🌾
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously forgive my late response I thought I got back to you on this one ❤️
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Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.
John
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hello dearest John that is such a beautiful comment and thought just lovely thank you ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Outstanding my friend. You take passion and love for this one person and enshrine it into a poem as divine as it is beautiful.
John
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Read MoreSitting in the restaurant Where we usually dine Been waiting since eight It is now past nine Suddenly the room was quite Felt a tingle in my spine My hair stood up and so Did that below my waistline Hands, legs, heart, trembled Before I spilled that bottle...
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This gets the blood pumping. Very well done.
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Thank you mistress… she does like the pumping part💋
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hello dearest Sam there is something primal in being desired this way beautiful 💕
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desire, and lust were the first primal instincts human beings ever experienced since they started walking on this Earth.
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Now THAT is a statement! Whew!
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I have lots of those statements in my arsenal… thanks Willow for your lovely statement
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Passionately penned, Sam. I concur with what the ladies above are saying my friend. Amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you my friend… as you can see being chocked by a lady has kept me away from here for some time
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Something about being claimed… I agree with Fia, it does get the blood pumping. In all the right places.
Nicely done xx
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it also feels very liberating being claimed… it is an oxymoronish feeling… oxymoronish!?!?! is that a word!?!?
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You know Sam, I am unsure. If it isn’t it damn well should be! 😉
xx
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Powerful work. Excellent.
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thank you .. I always appreciate your kind comments Tom
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Very nice indeed, but my sweet friend, you are no swine. Not to anyone !
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whatever animal she calls me by… it doesn’t change the fact that I am hers… not anyone else
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No one in their right or indeed write mind wants to feel down or depressed .. I found this post/poem very much to my liking indeed it was compelling .. Kind regards, Neville
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When you’ve been there, you know
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Peter, this touched my heart. Suffering is used to refine and strengthen us, much like a blacksmith uses a furnace to refine precious metals. Stay strong. 🌹🌾🕊️
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Alexandria et al
Thanks for reading and the comments.Its nice when others understand not just the words but the author.
Love you all
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I’ve had my share of dark thoughts. I don’t want to go back to that place. One can only hope the future is better.
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this made me smile dearest Benny great write 💕