Nailed it in such few words😘

Well written! I should try these more.

I’ve never tried this!
I’m intrigued.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Pretty cool. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

I remember seeing gulls in a Costco parking lot in Denver once and being surprised. A long way from the ocean, they were. I wonder if they ever missed the silence of the sea. Great haiku…I can’t seem to get the hand of writing them myself

This is good informative poem. My son has dyslexia and though it takes him a little longer to read things, it does not change who he is. I love when I can relate to a piece

You are you and that is all that matters. Great poem.

you sure do shine beautiful Jackie I leave out whole words my brain says are there you have my sympathy ❤️

Powerfully penned, Jackie. Amazing write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yes.. this is the message I needed today. Thank you, Fia. I will remember during other times of pressure as well.

Words of wisdom and empowerment. Excellent!

Oh girl, you stirred up some inspiration with this one! When the joy in the doing gives out, put down the pen until it comes again. This is the kind of message needed these days.

Well said. Thank you Angel Louise

hello veautiful Fia I used to get choked up because I though everything I wrote had to be great then later I realized I wasn’t blocked I was in my own way… this is very encouraging ❤️

Powerful piece & message Fia. Outstanding!!

Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Outstanding write my friend. Every writer can relate to this one, we’ve all been there, it’s part of the journey I believe. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Sage words indeed .. and a keeper for sure .. Neville 😎🌻👍

The Queen is a dark bad ass. Like the lay out and the rhyme scheme.

Hello Honoria,what a treat to see you here.
Like I was telling Crim it took me all night to write this poem. I’m pretty happy with the outcome. Thanks for looking, sweetheart.
Miss you
Jackie xx

Hello Damian.
Always a pleasure to see you on my page. I appreciate you too thank you my friend.
Jackie xx

Hi there vision, thank you. It means a lot and thank you for reading it and commenting. Appreciate you.
Jackie xx

Thank you very much Abby appreciate you.
Jackie xx