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Read MorePrefaceLady from Hell.Many years ago, as a child, I nearly escaped the jaws of hell. A hell that came veiled as an elder with a gentle face and soft, raspy voice. I remember her to this day as the...
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What a chapter. I won’t lie the grama part got to me.
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Hah! It indeed is Friday night! This was fun.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Ab.C.
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hello beautiful Fia I have a male alter ego too that comes forth in my writing this is sexy 💕
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Thank you so much, crimsin
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Fia. It is Friday night after all, my friend. Great spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous and powerful.
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
Many great lines but I just love these “Things that will make your mother have nightmares
Things that make the priest say a prayer, but still stare” haha.Wonderful ink
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Read MoreTake me as the sun risesWhen the night discards meWhen the mind is between worldsWhen the moment comes, I will feel you, it will be the endTake me at noonThe heat scorches the fleshBeads of sweat trickle down to...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Kinda get’s the blood moving, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. I have been busy lately and I wanted to post something soft but still Fia. lol
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Love the idea of the series. Love just the subtle romance.
Great ink.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you. I usually am blunt, but this helps to practice pulling it back once in a while.
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This vibe is so sexy and picturesque. I like the mood it invokes.
Much respect.
Naaj
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Thank you, I do not have to be in your face to get my point across all the time. Lol.
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Read MoreDon’t tell me to calm downthe sky forgot me tonightand I felt it,like a hard slap to my soulI sat there—fourth floorcompass pointing eastheart cracked wide openready for a miracleand all I gotwas a black sky empty and bleakDon’t...
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Fantastic!
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Thank you❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Superb.
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Thank you❤️
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WOWZA! What a remark I am over the moon 😏 so just to give you a little background. I knew that last night was the last chance to watch/ see the strawberry moon in my lifetime, because the next time it shows up will be in 2043 and I seriously doubt I’ll be alive by then, just saying.
So all day, I was planning to go to the beach because my robot told me that would be the best place to watch it coming up over the horizon. Unfortunately, I had no gas to get there and I’m broke at the moment. Ahem, all right so I readjusted and I put on my compass and it turns out that my balcony is literally facing east which is you know where you would expect the moon to come up, right? And mind you, I’ve seen plenty of full moons in the same area. so I sat on my new balcony, furniture, excited and I was looking and looking and looking, and girl, let me just tell you I sat there until 11 o’clock not a goddamn thing. Nothing! Not even stars were out. There was like one I could see🫤 meanwhile my robot assured me and I looked it up myself that Gloucester Ma had a fully clear sky last night, so I was totally befuddled & disappointed I actually cried. I’m not even lying😂
Anyway, back to your beautiful remark about my poem. Thank you so much, Adria you truly truly touched my heart, thank you so much for the beautiful things you said and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. I’m not gonna lie. I was drinking Brandy lol so you know. I gotta say it my best Poetry comes when I drink, which I don’t drink often anymore like I used to. I’m just saying. I love you girl you’re phenomenal too and by the way, I really love your voice. It is absolutely beautiful in fact it’s celestial.❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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Best line: bruised, bright, but distant and still rising…
Exquisite poetic voice you have! I will read on to your other works, zazzles! Bravo!Daniel
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Hello Daniel , glad you enjoyed this poem. It was quite a disappointing evening. Welp such is life.
Jackie ❤️
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A great read. Every verse was intense.
I saw the red moon here in Blighty.
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Hi James, glad you got to see it 🙂
Usually i can see the moon from my balcony. But not that night. Thank you for the read and comments.
Jackie ❤️
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Beautiful work.
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Sounds interesting my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian