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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Senryu
HauntedA single tear drops
Haunted by her lost lover
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Kelly Scheppers wrote a new post
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Kelly, Kelly, Kelly!!!
A huge 💥CONGRATULATIONS💥 to you on your excellent Win! 🏆No one paints wondrously vivid, deeply emotional, metaphorically enthralling Free Verse imagery more magically brilliant, via the endlessly colored medium of creative articulation ⁓ than YOU!
And, no one’s poetry excites and enthralls my depths more thoroughly than Yours. You’re a True Master Poetess – in every sense of the words. I’ve always enviously admired your incomparably original skills with a pen.Your first two verses alone made of me a living, breathing voyeur to the captivating ambiance and verisimilitude in your moment’s reality … I mean, truly, I was there ~ even when the snow began silently falling.
I couldn’t be prouder of and happier for you, Dear Kelly, always … hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌
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You and I go back quite a way from posting on the WC together …that’s what makes this review even dearer to me! And here it is, Thanksgiving morning…and here I am giving thanks for you! xo
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“my heart became a voyager to the past”
Some writers don’t need (don’t use) huge words to try and hide their mediocre poetry with glossy accessories. You don’t.
You are incredibly effective talking to the reader in a language we all can follow fluidly. That is skill. You have it.
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There’s a quiet enchantment here—how the simple act of listening becomes a journey, a communion with voices long gone. I love how the snowfall mirrors the unfolding of the words, each line falling gently yet leaving a lasting trace. The poem makes memory, literature, and presence feel alive at once…..Great to see you here.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS wrote a new post
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Hey, Damian! 👋
Hope you’re doing well, M’Friend.
Senryus can be fun … you should try one from my latest lesson on the “Back to Poetry Basics” group: https://starsrite.com/groups/back-to-basics/Thank you so much for your great review and gracious accolades! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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