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    war

    assasin of faith quiet your gunslong out of need war has begunseething design a future of naughtexplain yourself in the brightnessof exploding nuculear energyweapons of mass destructionman devolves time hiccupsdestiny halts takes a deep breathand proceedes forwardsorrow invades where...

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    The Wicked Man

    Once Upon a Midnight sky  A rendezvous between you and I    A secret plan that was never to be told Was let out and all the others now know    I wear his mark that he had given me Your eyes show there is no...

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    • A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)

    • a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • There was a wicked man
      who had a wicked cock…

      But I’m a wicked girl
      who wants to rock your world

    • Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶

      With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.

      Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.

      “Once Upon a Midnight sky
      A rendezvous between you and I”

      Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
      you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal

        • You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨

          We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
          You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.

          If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍

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    thunder

    an intensity in a moment floods meyou smile at me and I get tripped updamn it, I blushyour charm is disarmingsacred honesty, it makes me uncomfortable, this vulenrabiltiyyou wield your sexcaptivated I stareglancing at your furtively until our eyes...

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    pretty when I cry

    my sadness sufferswept understanding my tears formyour shadow loomsstoic resolve you don't need meoccult need I'm a groupie in your shadesorrow gleans information from your silencejilted passion longs for your touchbut I'm pretty when I cryyou covet my longingdesire...

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  • Golden Words (promises)

    G o l d e n  W o r d sO’ that I were handsome,buff as I want to be,I’d sweep you off your feet …steal all your love for me.I’d be there beside you,listening to your woes,offering soft...

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    • That is beautiful. I do not see where you can improve on that.

      • Hi, Fia! 🌸

        How wonderful to hear your sweet voice this morning, sharing the loveliness of approval for this rather romantic little poem.

        You truly are appreciated and enjoyed! ⁓ Rascal🖌

    • Ohhh, Adira,
      You’ve taken a second bite’a my apple this morning 🍎
      First, S i m p a t i c o … now, this!

      Welcome back, Dear Poetess À Moi 🌺
      With such effulgent sentiments, it’s no wonder the bouquet of your utterances have left a hopeful bard yearning the gentle touch of your satin caress.

      Ahhh, that “she” were more truth than fiction, what succulently delightful splendor such a blessing would be.

      Thank you, Lady Adira, ever-so warmly, for sharing your lovely presence and encouraging accolades!
      Mornin’ hugs to Thee! ⁓ Rascal🖌

    • I’ve yet to see someone of your caliber when it comes to poetry, Richard. Your professionalism stands out.
      A great offering my friend. 🙂

      • And, my very excellent, longtime friend, I thank you most gratefully for bestowing such a high caliber review upon this romantic little homage.

        Gosh, Tim!
        I must apologize for missing your inspiringly gracious review … but, I’ve quit receiving email notices from SR on reviews and messages, etc.

        I’ve always enjoyed whatever you share with me! ⁓ Richard🖌

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