Thank you, Raven xoxo

Agree with Raven. That is one helluva solid landing at the end

Some endings never end, others end before they’ve really begun, but always the questions remain. Well played 🌼

Powerfully penned, Fia. You stuck the ending my friend, love the sleight of hand on the last line. Very clever, indeed. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello beautiful poetess thank you graciously for the love on this 💕

Passionately penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Amazing Crimsin
Thank you for sharing this piece🙏🏻

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

” rebellious need paints me a villain
no harlot, nay
a poet of chance, instead ”

Never…none like you, Brenda.

Bravo

Thank you, Hj xoxo

hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕

Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.

Damian

Awww, Fia =(

How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.

“Love is a demon’s creation.
It obscures and twists the mind,
That being in complete submergence is good.”

Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.

I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.

Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌

Superb artwork choice:
(V2L1, add an apostrophe to Passion’s)