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    honey

    in the between time of sighs and tearsof angry words and needed blisscommingling with lusta passionate abandon where the night hushesand all the spirits quickenas our desire burnssated fate, to indulge in youmy fantasy mixed with realitytoo potent to...

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    • Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜

      • hello dearest Benny blushes well yes…thank you graciously you made me smile 💕

    • Oh! This is very good, Brenda.

    • I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
      Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞

    • hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕

    • Powerful. You paint this scene well.

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.

      John

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    it pains, on the morrow bleed

    contemptious need flooding over my sorrownever on the morrow to be let freeit's just another day of sadnesswith knowledge, heavy privy to his holiest's feelingsbedlam vain, I am not enough, I'm afraidlike Cain before me my gratitude is given...

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    • Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
      Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
      You are loved.

      • hello lovely Alexandria good evening thank you most graciously for such a beautiful comment and thought 💕 I guess this was a conversation I was having with God today sometimes I feel like when he asks something of me I am ungrateful…my heart hurts over this that my first insinct is to be selfish…I truly appreciate you tonight 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously forgive my late response I thought I got back to you on this one ❤️

    • Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.

      John

      • hello dearest John that is such a beautiful comment and thought just lovely thank you ❤️

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    mirage

    strictly cautious of my soulit shines sometimes gathering stars to itthey covet the lovely shimmerdesiring to know me better my cover for a moment set aside my thoughts tumble forth from my lipsmetaphors for the sanctity of beingfor a...

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    The Repatriation of Shards

    The Repatriation of Shards   What shall become of us now we    are broken .. Two parts of one whole, with each of our shards both    fragmented and torn, like twin pages lifted and pulled,    from some ancient book perhaps .. And...

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    Haiku # Woken by Doves

    Haiku # Woken by Doves   how lucky we are how soft our morning arrives    woken by doves ..      

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