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Read MoreNick's KnacksIt used to be called Cash Thrifts. It was a combination thrift store and pawn shop The police raid determined they sold drugs and guns and worse.Former Buffalonian Nick Smith, aprolific author under 20 names, boughtit in a...
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I just posted part 2.
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I read this backward. I read the second piece before this. Now it makes sense. lol No Sparks,,yeah right
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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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Powerful stuff Fia
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Thank you,Peter;))
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Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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Read MoreGODDESS ON GODDESS Four large breasts bang together. Smacks not unlike balls slapping furiously on plump ass cheeks!But no men are ever allowed. EVER!They are locked out! Men are putrid. Today is only for the "great" women. Their rubenesque curves make...
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Oh this is hot. The wrist inside Tara brought her to climax. Yup very potent and erotic write. love it
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Thanks so much.
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Read MoreSpeak to meWords insight and exciteSpeak to meCradle me in actionSpeak to meTell me the nuance of your touchSpeak to meI overflow in anticipationSpeak to meLet it be rough and rawSpeak to metake me in the dark so I...
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Ooohhh. This is good!
Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
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Thank you so much, Adel. It was fun.
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Passionately penned, Fia. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian,))
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I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
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Thank you Styxian;))
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Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Oh yes! Tell me more…more…more!
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Ooo, RPM. (Smiling)
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Read MoreWith No Hint of An EndThese words may have no beginning,but they bounceand echo loud, around the labyrinthsof the self-same shell they were first each imprisoned in ..Fine words they are tooand when whispered soft, might bemistaken for the sea,or the wind,...
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This is so tender
Favorite part is how you ended it“with not one hint
of a beginning, no signs of a
middle nor trace of an imminent end even”
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Thanks tons Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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“These words may have no beginning”… they have no end either… Enchanting, captivating, breathtaking… passionate as only how passion should be. this is a masterpiece of poetry and love, though the reader smiles as they read, yet it pulls a tender tear from the heart, a tear of love. Mr. Ken would be joyous reading this. beyond gorgeous….
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Many thanks my very dearest of literary friends .. Please excuse my delayed response, I have been a bit busy of late and am still stumbling near blindly around this delightful website .. p.s. am glad you smile so favourably upon this little scribble and hope that Mr. Simm would similarly approve .. Kindest of regards & with wishes for all good things, Your friend, ME 🙂
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Beautiful work.
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Cheers are clearly in order Thomas .. So cheers, Neville 👍
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Beautifully penned, Neville. A very delicate write my friend. Excellent work.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you most kindly kind sir .. So muchly appreciated .. Neville 😎👍
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After reading the comments above, what could I possibly say? Hopefully, and it’s not just my wishful thinking it is the end part that is “real”. But that middle should be “real” as well. Damn Neville, your poem makes the reader (me) hope it is all “real” (and yes, even the fantasy parts!!) The sum of all these parts is: I loved reading your poem, Neville!!!!!!!!!
Curt
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You are so very kind Curt, bless you my friend .. Neville 😎👍
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